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stars slowly faded as the sun began to rise~ dawn sky was deathless

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Date: 10/6/2022 1:13:00 PM
what an awesome last line!
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Date: 10/5/2022 7:16:00 AM
Day's rebirth enveloped by heavenly beauty, my dearest friend, Lasaad! God bless you!
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Date: 10/5/2022 4:50:00 AM
Pleasant as a sunrise!
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Date: 10/5/2022 4:04:00 AM
- A beautiful beautiful sunrise, Lad :)
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Date: 10/4/2022 10:46:00 PM
Another beautiful haiku !
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Date: 10/4/2022 8:28:00 PM
Nice Haiku, Lasaad. Bill
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