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The Sun Is Our Playground - Collaboration With White Wolf

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Nothing comes close to your love so divine, Eyes sparkle as I take a look deep inside, I drink in your essence like bubbly red wine, Entwined in a dance like blue oceans so wide. Forever together is how we belong, United as one how we are meant to be, Never to be severed, our love is so strong, Showing the world love that can be so free Ignoring the distance I hold you, love wins We fly through the clouds, jump the rock at our feet We circle each other, dive down till it spins The sun is our playground, we enjoy the fierce heat We climb fast, we’re so wild, child, we jump and we die Then they’ll write us a poem: Heine’s Lorelei *** 4 foot Amphybrach Copyright © White Wolf and Darren White April 1, 2017

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Sara Ella

Date: 4/4/2017 5:48:00 PM

Love is so free and you both did a great poem that reminds me of how powerful LOVE can be <3 Lovely poem you two. :)

White Wolf

Date: 4/3/2017 9:47:00 PM

How are you today, Duir? I love how this one turned out mate!

Darren White
Date: 4/4/2017 1:34:00 AM

I emailed you :) And yes, this one is wonderful!

Phillip Garcia

Date: 4/2/2017 9:47:00 PM

How come nobody ever wants to collaborate with me? Makes me feel blue. Your poem, on the other hand, is flawless. Very well done, you two

Darren White
Date: 4/2/2017 11:19:00 PM

I want (volunteers) :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/1/2017 2:26:00 PM

AW...FANTASTIC....Really enjoyed this..Indeed love is free...How beautiful.Well done-Both of you.

Darren White
Date: 4/1/2017 2:42:00 PM

Thank you so much, Charma :)

Doug Vinson

Date: 4/1/2017 11:27:00 AM

Guys, this poem speaks of muscular souls and free spirits. There is a touching sensitivity to life and a reckless, impish fearlessness that leaves me smiling on this fine morning.

Darren White
Date: 4/1/2017 12:15:00 PM

Yes, it does, and thank you, Doug :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/1/2017 6:42:00 AM

Good Morning Darren and White Wolf too. The sun is your (our) playground. And yes, may love always win. Such wonderful thoughts and expression from you both. Can I join you in that flight along the clouds. How grand is that. Very. Thank you for sharing your wonderful collaboration. The theme is timeless. Well done entirely. PS its great to see you posting Darren just don't get too tired or in a position to give you pain. Remember body mechanics.

Darren White
Date: 4/1/2017 7:37:00 AM

You're absolutely right Lisa, I am now in a slightly upricght position and I can use my arms and hands easier, so that is good. Don't get surprised when you see the lengthy poem I post in a bit. I crafted it before I went to hospital, and only had to post it :)