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The Stump I Fell In Love With

On the prairies of Dakota I had never seen a tree too big to get my arms around. It was a shock to me when I saw the stump set on the road that a big car could drive through. I could not believe that it was real, it just could not be true. It was in the state of Washington on old Highway 99, someone had placed the monstrous stump and posted up a sign. The thrill of driving through it never waned. One could even shelter in it when it rained. The stump became a hazard as the traffic problem grew. One day it wasn’t there at all, the stump we could drive through . I wondered where they put my stump and feared the very worst. but they’d taken it to a nearby park, not to the dump as I feared first. Now everyone can see it, that remnant of a tree and learn a bit of early history on how things used to be. As for me I’ll always love it. That stump brings memories of when I was young and happy and could be impressed by trees. For contest

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Date: 10/18/2010 10:13:00 AM
Always a winner from you, Joyce. I love the way you describe this huge, drive-through stump and how exciting it was for you to see it as a child. I'm glad they didn't get rid of it. I do have a photo taken in the Redwood Forest of my inside a very large tree trunk. I think the guide said some of those trees predate the era of Christ. Excellent "stump" poem. I was stumped by the premise, but you pulled it off. I'll take your advice on the syllable poem and see if it works. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/15/2010 2:13:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with impressive work about the stump...I have seen in pictures where the center is cut out of a huge Redwood Tree and it is over a road...I always wonder where that could be..I am delighted that you wrote this work..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 10/15/2010 8:30:00 AM
I love this heartwarming piece....and I too remember my dad taking us in a car, and diving through a huge tree stump, when I was a child. It seemed like a fairy tale! :)
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Date: 10/15/2010 6:35:00 AM
very creative and enjoyable write on the stump of a tree, Joyce
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Date: 10/14/2010 9:38:00 PM
Nicely done Joyce. Loved the poem and the story. Joe
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Date: 10/14/2010 9:34:00 PM
lovely poem, good luck in the contest
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