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The Starry Night

Under the starry sky, she lies Her thoughts rummaging through her dreams Often forgotten and unseen. She drifts through a heavy fog; A fog that clouds her mind. Trying to comprehend the darkness, Yearning to make sense. The numbness of the fog creeps in. She struggles to hold on To her memories. But her foolish heart doesn't understand. With all her might, She clings to false hopes; False hopes to relive those days. It gets fainter, The echoes of the past. The serene numbness takes over. She gives in, at last...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/8/2017 10:05:00 PM
let your emotions flow through every starry night Aditi. Very nice poem.// Madan Mohan
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Date: 6/7/2017 1:15:00 PM
- New to Poetry Soup ... Welcome and thanks for your first poem, Aditi :) - // Sun :)
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Date: 6/7/2017 5:07:00 AM
Oh, I like this a lot, Aditi! A great write
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White Wolf
Date: 6/7/2017 5:21:00 AM
You should do it more often
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Aditi Dutta
Date: 6/7/2017 5:08:00 AM
Thank you so much. It's my first time writing something like this.

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