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The Spritual Hurricane's Eye

Temporal vision is all temporary wise, leading, deceiving, so let be open the pupil of my spiritual eye. Surpassing, deception, dissembling & diatribe. Lose the misunderstandings inherent in the clouding conspiring passing play, of life’s speeding day by night nocturnal wise ways. Light surpassing time & circumstance, grant me leave, grant me space in light waves to journey with their nuanced dance through the passes of time, looming all round over bluffs, and the parting of ways. let the eye of true insight enrapture me in pure delight. ©Joe Maverick 5-02-2011 For Rick Parise's contest.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt

Date: 1/20/2014 5:30:00 AM

beautiful piece.... well penned..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2013 3:04:00 PM

hello and goodbye, Joe. time for me to get home now. I was just here at work catching up on Soup comments. Have a lovely Tuesday. You might even be almost in bed for today!!

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 5/27/2012 10:03:00 PM

"The Spiritual Hurricane's Eye", would surely be where "the eye of true Insight" may be found, Joe. It can see beyond the clouding of "circumstance, time, and misunderstanding" and can give you a whole new perspective! Keep well, Joe!! Love, Mikki

Judy Ball

Date: 1/28/2012 1:52:00 PM

Ooooo! Love this and I agree, let me also be so awakened. Great stuff. God Bless, JB

James Foulk

Date: 4/7/2011 11:30:00 AM

very good piece of fine poetry. thank you for reading The Red Water Pump and for your comment

Robert Ball

Date: 4/4/2011 9:53:00 AM

very good Joe, just kidding but I used to watch maverick and you have his sense of right and wrong, great show, and e-mailing another maverick, keep the pen flowing my new found poet your very good. God bless

John Freeman

Date: 2/22/2011 5:21:00 PM

Great spiritual eye Joe,(Lose the misunderstandings inherent in the clouding) Yes me too, I'll take a dish of that, Smile. Agape, Moses

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/21/2011 6:48:00 PM

enjoyed reading your work as usual....and thanks for your comments on my work. You are an inspiration to me!

Daver Austin

Date: 2/19/2011 6:22:00 AM

I love the title. Lots of spiritual energy in this one. Love, Dave

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/16/2011 4:31:00 AM

To have the ability to discern in the spirit the inner depts so that one can wisely choose is a blessing.Good to be able to read your work this morn...Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/15/2011 6:02:00 PM

Hi! Joe,.. deep and passes right like an illusion,,, a real delight to read,, enjoyed,..p.d.

Constance La France

Date: 2/15/2011 1:08:00 PM

And I was enraptured by your words, it was like floating over bluffs~~

Matthew Anish

Date: 2/15/2011 12:24:00 PM

I liked the last line but I think you should leave out the word "sight". Another nice line is "nocturnal wise ways. Peace & blessings Matthew Anish

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/15/2011 10:40:00 AM

Hi Joe, Thanks for stopping by my work today. Mary is still trying to figure out how I can get the money for the book to you without you having to pay for check cashing fees. She's going to see if the same fees apply to money orders. I can't purchase Lira here. Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/13/2011 10:40:00 AM

Joe, this is quite a brilliant take, this write of yours.. I love your line "nocturnal wise ways." Thanks for your kind comment on my piece today ;) Wilma

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/8/2011 3:20:00 AM

Joe, this looks like a good entry for Rick's contest.

Anthony Nutter

Date: 2/8/2011 2:58:00 AM

I was caught up in this Hurricane an found the serenity of the eye. Well written my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2011 4:36:00 PM

I really like the ending of this one. it sounds so delightful. Good luck with the contest, this is one just not up my alley. LUv, Andrea

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 2/6/2011 2:44:00 PM

Hi Joe! "The Spiritual Hurricane's Eye" would surely precipitate an oncoming force. Your "eye of seeing", will certainly enrapture another "in pure delight". Nicely thought out and delivered...thanks Joe! Blessings to you, Mikki

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/6/2011 2:32:00 PM

That poem I wrote was in anger ofter a little spat with my husband. He said some mean things and then did not apologize until the next eveniing. after he read my poem....hehe

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/6/2011 1:53:00 PM

Your soup Mail replied, Joe

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/6/2011 1:25:00 PM

I appreciate the way which you have presented the theme of the third eye perception, Joe

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/6/2011 10:42:00 AM

Elegant words Joe and good luck if entered for Rick's new third eye contest.. powerful premise instilled in your lines of this spiritual hurricane..luv..good luck..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/6/2011 10:18:00 AM

How I love the line "grant me space in light waves to journey," Joe. The storms that rage within our minds is well compared to a "hurricane." Thank you for taking me on this journey with you. Best wishes in the contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/6/2011 8:57:00 AM

your spirit moves me with such depth, joe! jo[e you can comment on mine" eye of light..." we have some things in common! much enjoyed with winning luck in the contest! :)