The Spiders Web

The evening coming on, 
its slow creep in the calm air, 
holding onto the days last warmth 
left by a departing sun. 

I sit and take it in, feel 
its familiar moods. First, 
a peace in the arms
of a moment, a soft sink 
into the now. Then a twist 
of sadness in having to let 
something pleasant go, 
dragging behind it
the thought of another day
closer to the final.

Above me, a spider spins
its web. I can almost feel
the sticky threads pull tight
across my mind, 
each circuit made to knit
this masterpiece in space
sends a tremor along a nerve
and limb. I imagine me
the maker.

How the night would be
sprung on a trigger, set 
to snare a careless wing 
or a wandering bug, bound
tight in an instant to feed
a hunger. To live life
like that - the world, time
held on the end 
of a primed nerve, 
the slightest movement
sending the soul off
into a spasm.

But then, the evening chill
coming in, the ache
of old bones, 
nerves gone numb.
My mind still hanging onto
the taut threads as I go.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Toney Avatar
May 15, 2023 at 8:44 AM
Paul, you brilliantly elevate normal experiences into phenomenological events. In this poem you're sitting under a spider's web, "closer to the final." But you gift us with, "I can almost feel the sticky threads pull tight across my mind, each circuit ... sends a tremor along a nerve and limb..." Your most excellent words in this and your other poems send my imagination spinning further, even hours after reading them. Kudos to you, sir!
Willason Avatar
May 15, 2023 at 10:27 PM
Very moved by your most generous comments Mark. Grateful that you gave of your time to read, digest and provide such a sensitive response. A welcomed guest in my little world. Valued immensely, regards Paul
Lane Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 5:53 AM
hmmm Paul. A titch maudlin, nevertheless your ability to weave words that hold me as tightly as a spider's web is to be admired, and I do. Rather would I be the weaver than the one whose mind and body has been woven around.
Willason Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 6:21 AM
Thanks Lin for yr comments. Weaved this one out to the edge, playing on the ear as well as the mind to see how far the speaker had to stretch into the maker. Let it go its own way to some extent. Value yr words...take care.
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