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The Spaceship Enchantment

The sun's over ninety million miles away While the moon shines nightly above But the stars reside in your gentle eyes Like tiny sparkling diamonds of love On a spaceship we call “Enchantment” We set sail on placid seas of bliss Wrapped in the arms of the goddess of love Enraptured by the warmth of each kiss Floating like a couple of heavenly bodies On a collision course of emotions Destined to be joined in celestial union Filled with great love and devotion There's no greater feeling than mutual love Poets strive to capture it in rhyme The ultimate emotion known to man A feeling of pure joy so sublime The sun's over ninety million miles away While the moon shines nightly above But the stars reside in your gentle eyes My darling, my obsession, my love ©Jack Ellison 2012

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Date: 3/17/2018 2:06:00 AM
"But the stars reside in your gentle eyes Like tiny sparkling diamonds of love" I appreciate your wondrous, romantic lines in some of your older works. "Floating like a couple of heavenly bodies On a collision course of emotions" My favorite! Always, Laura
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/17/2018 5:39:00 AM
What an old softie... haven't changed! Sweetness describes you, dear Laura! Eternal love, Happy Jack XOX
Date: 9/14/2012 12:08:00 PM
Gifted... in writing And in love... Amazing... Keep writing. We love it!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/14/2012 3:24:00 PM
As I said twelve comments ago, "I'm blown away by your response my dear sweet Carol!!! Thank you my sweet new friend! Jack xox
Date: 9/8/2012 4:34:00 PM
Beautifully written. This spaceship does not have to travel at the speed of light. It can take its sweet time traveling around in space.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/8/2012 6:03:00 PM
Thank you Robert, for the good words! Cheers, Jack
Date: 9/8/2012 7:01:00 AM
very tender and lovely!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/8/2012 9:07:00 AM
Thanks for your sweet reply, Ilene! Have a great weekend... love and hugs, Jack xox

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