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The Spaceship Enchantment

The sun's over ninety million miles away
While the moon shines nightly above 
But the stars reside in your gentle eyes
Like tiny sparkling diamonds of love

On a spaceship we call “Enchantment”
We set sail on placid seas of bliss
Wrapped in the arms of the goddess of love
Enraptured by the warmth of each kiss

Floating like a couple of heavenly bodies
On a collision course of emotions
Destined to be joined in celestial union
Filled with great love and devotion

There's no greater feeling than mutual love
Poets strive to capture it in rhyme
The ultimate emotion known to man
A feeling of pure joy so sublime

The sun's over ninety million miles away
While the moon shines nightly above 
But the stars reside in your gentle eyes
My darling, my obsession, my love

©Jack Ellison 2012

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Date: 3/17/2018 2:06:00 AM
"But the stars reside in your gentle eyes Like tiny sparkling diamonds of love" I appreciate your wondrous, romantic lines in some of your older works. "Floating like a couple of heavenly bodies On a collision course of emotions" My favorite! Always, Laura
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/17/2018 5:39:00 AM
What an old softie... haven't changed! Sweetness describes you, dear Laura! Eternal love, Happy Jack XOX
Date: 9/14/2012 12:08:00 PM
Gifted... in writing And in love... Amazing... Keep writing. We love it!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/14/2012 3:24:00 PM
As I said twelve comments ago, "I'm blown away by your response my dear sweet Carol!!! Thank you my sweet new friend! Jack xox
Date: 9/8/2012 4:34:00 PM
Beautifully written. This spaceship does not have to travel at the speed of light. It can take its sweet time traveling around in space.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/8/2012 6:03:00 PM
Thank you Robert, for the good words! Cheers, Jack
Date: 9/8/2012 7:01:00 AM
very tender and lovely!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/8/2012 9:07:00 AM
Thanks for your sweet reply, Ilene! Have a great weekend... love and hugs, Jack xox