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The Sound of His Breathing

Sorting through the worries in my head Furious with the creaking of the bed I toss and I turn And I yearn and yearn For answers to the questions of life Wondering why I can’t be a good wife And I hear his heavy breathing… Rhythmic and slow And I know I know… He is deep in his sleep And I just want to weep I close my eyes tight Hoping all will be right My heart whispers a prayer To God who’s always there “God…life is a mystery Sometimes it’s beyond me Where will it end? What’s behind the bend? Please grant this one plea Please….listen to me… When my heart’s filled with dread As I lie on my bed Lord, make my world right Forever and always…. Let me hear the sound of his Breathing at night!"

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/14/2015 11:54:00 PM

God will always show us what we need to see; that's what this poem tells me. Awesome one. The first stanza is heart-wrenching. I can feel your pain. Wonderful one! Always, Laura

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/15/2015 1:22:00 AM

Aww, I wish he did share your passion more.... You are something enlivening, glorious in light and strength! Your poetry should stirr him to the core! ~Laura

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/15/2015 12:10:00 AM

My hubby doesn't share my passion for poetry. I told him I won with a poem written about him. He gave me some compliment after I read it, but I wish he'd have been more enthused. Oh well...Thanks for reading me again, Laura. Very sweet of you. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/6/2014 10:15:00 AM

I prefer a different kind of heavy breathing! Sorry I couldn't resist *lol* . The poem is perfect and moving, there is a comfort in hearing the rhythmic breath of a loved one.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/21/2013 12:45:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Donna Jones

Date: 5/21/2013 9:17:00 AM

Sweet Eileen ...great poem...and may you always have the comfort of the sound of your loved one sweet breath of life... congratulations

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 5/21/2013 1:22:00 AM

Many congratulations on your win Eileen love, well done xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/20/2013 8:45:00 PM

Eileen, Congratulations!! A nice winning poem... Linda

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 5/20/2013 6:31:00 PM

I have thought these thoughts myself when my husband snores. I never complain as I would hate to hear silence there instead and him be gone. He had open heart surgury and the fear of losing him forever was more frightening than a bit of snoring....after rambling on I wanted to congratulate you for your win. SuZ

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/20/2013 7:15:00 PM

Thankyou Eileen: For the long life wishes. Ha ha I almost wondered about the breathing vs snoring. You are right ... more poetic .

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/20/2013 6:35:00 PM

Thanks every so much, Suzanne! So sweet of you to share your thoughts and fears with me. Yes...we have had some scares with my husband, but of another nature, and I am mindful of what my life would be without him. I wish your hubby long life! :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/20/2013 6:35:00 PM

PS...yes, breathing was a little more poetic than snoring! ;)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/20/2013 5:02:00 PM

Yes the sound of his breathing must have been very reassuring. A great poem for the contest. Congratulations. Love Joyce

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/20/2013 6:36:00 PM

Yes, Joyce! It is...thanks ever so much for this lovely visit and kind words.

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/20/2013 2:03:00 PM

Those nights can be longer than forever, when our head is filled with such somber thoughts. This is a wonderful introspective poem......Congratulations!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/20/2013 6:38:00 PM

Thanks, Carrie...yes...having to see my Mom continuously deteriorate due to MS while growing up, I've become a hypochondriac of sorts and often I'm tormented with thoughts of death and dying. This poem is very true to life.

Judy Konos

Date: 5/20/2013 1:28:00 PM

Congratulations on your BIG Win!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/20/2013 6:38:00 PM

Judy...a BIG hug to you! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/20/2013 12:03:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sometimes we forget to be thankful for our mate..Great that you remembered that..Sara

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/20/2013 6:39:00 PM

Thanks, Sara. Yes....I am thankful. It is an attitude we need to nurture every day. Hugs!

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/20/2013 11:06:00 AM

It's a poem penned with the words of a very good heart as a very good wife. Excellent piece enjoyed a lot. Wish you congratulation on your win with 1st placement. Thanks....,loved always, bl

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/20/2013 6:40:00 PM

I wish I could be a better wife, but I do what I can, BL. Thanks for the lovely visit and encouraging words.

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 5/20/2013 11:00:00 AM

A very heartfelt poem. Congratulations on your win. Connie

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/20/2013 6:40:00 PM

Connie, thanks for your visit and post. I appreciate it. :)