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the sorting hat

Like Harry Potter, the sorting hat (my mom)
has placed me in a bloody, crimson colored school.
It’s disorienting, as I go about, the logos are wack.

Poor little rich girl
no beachside lovers
this interminable, scorching summer.

I’m swept up by scholastic spirit.
Can you hear it? Cause it’s deafening me,
on this cool, dry, Boston orientation day.

As we finished our morning 8k jog,
the sunrise blossomed, painting hot lava clouds
with hues of yellow, orange and pink.

We’re traipsing unfamiliar paths,
It’s not what we’re used to, the roads are uneven
and the architecture’s all boxy and wrong.
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Songs for this:
New Toy by Lene Lovich
Better After All by Jonatha Brooke
Now At Last by Feist
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 12:24 PM
Congrats on POTD! The sorting hat…my mom! Everything is wrong! Perhaps you’ll get uswd to it! A Fave!
Vionet Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 5:54 PM
Thanks. I'm already getting used to it, sorta. =]
Nicole Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 5:44 PM
' the sunrise blossomed with hues of yellow, orange and pink. ' Can I see it ? Yes, I can. Such a beautiful image. Congratulations on all your accomplishments, and, on receiving Poem of the Day. My best to you, Anais. Hugs, Brandy
Vionet Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 8:04 PM
Thank you! Poem of the day?! I had no idea =]
Lawless Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 1:48 PM
well the streets of the city were all cowpaths to and through the Common. Good luck in the "PRC" (People's Republic of Cambridge
Vionet Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 8:05 PM
Thank you! I'm so new at it that I don't know my way around (thank god there's an app for that) =]
Goldsmith Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 11:53 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away........
Vionet Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 8:06 PM
Thank you! You're too kind. I'm shocked (poem of the day).
Andresen Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 10:12 AM
- Congratulations and good luck, Anais :) - hugs
Vionet Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 8:06 PM
Thank you so much!
Anaya Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 9:07 AM
First of all Anais, congraduations on your accomplishments @ Yale! "What’s next?" oh yeah and matriculation. You look fab in crimson and good hair helps! Big win for Harvard -->Trump is blocked from banning foreign students! Yay ~ Congrats on POTD! Ovation !Veritas!
Vionet Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 8:09 PM
Thank you! You're too kind (hair). As if the President of the United States has the authority to order a high school around. If there were any law anymore, the Bill of Attainder Clause of the U.S. Constitution prevents the governmant (or President) from singling out Apple or Harvard for special punishments.
Rodgers Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 5:33 AM
Dear Anais, your words ache of newness, O that crimson school, the off-kilter logos, the heat of a summer that refuses to end. I feel your longing for the familiar, your quiet courage as you jog through Boston’s alien dawn. Even in dissonance, you find beauty. I’m proud of you for your honesty, your spirit, the way you transform uncertainty into poetry. Congrats on POTD. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Vionet Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 8:11 PM
What a wonderful comment. Thank you, you're very kind. =]
Jones Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 12:54 AM
My favorite verse it the fourth as it is so imaginative and colorful! Great job on an engaging potd! Congratulations!
Vionet Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 8:14 PM
Thank you, POTD was a huge surprise. =]
Theraven Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 5:21 PM
Anais, Wonders in a sorting hat, though crimson may not suit as well as pale Yale blue. Oh man, what a voice from a Feisty Leslie'd heart. Perhaps a perfect choice for Boston. -Richard
Vionet Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 8:15 PM
Thanks, Richard! =]
Fallica Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 7:02 AM
Geeze! You ever think about running away to the circus? I hear there’s good ones in Europe. (Still got a ‘story’ waiting for you in Quora.)
Vionet Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 8:16 PM
No, I'd be scooping elephant poop, I have no skills! I answered - sorry it took so long. =]
Conn Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:34 AM
Love that profile pic. Could I get a signed copy? Do you have names for those two poignant and elegant elbows?
Conn Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 3:23 PM
I'd go with Smith and Wesson. You'd look sharp in nothing but deerskin chaps and strawberry lipgloss.
Vionet Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 8:17 PM
I've never been complemented on my elbows before! Ha! =] Thanks.
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