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The Silken Snowflakes

The silken snowflakes swinging by the sweet champagne Your impish image sits inside the icy wine glass unique The cinnamon passion switching the saffron surges insane The night at the sharp bends swinging at the funky music Should we go to the collaborating single malt and start Or you would like to sit with the jasmine until ten And write the poetry of the sweat and beat of the heart Under the wonder of the stars with the red nibbed pen Blows the blue breeze beside the bubbling brook The bouquet of the black basket a blooming sword The lion licks its lusty lips as the lovely eyes look The pink passion pricking the pen to pour the words Between the stanzas we shall make a pause to start again Silken snowflakes swinging by the sweet champagne ___________________________________________________________ March 28, 2018 Alliteration poem - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 4/3/2018 9:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Probir, excellent alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/4/2018 5:51:00 AM
Thanks, Eve ...
Date: 4/3/2018 3:03:00 PM
what a fun poem, Probir. Congrats on your win.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/3/2018 8:53:00 PM
What a nice appreciation ! ... thank you, Line ...
Date: 4/2/2018 7:30:00 PM
Well done Probir! Congratulations on your first place win!! Best, Judy
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/2/2018 8:43:00 PM
Thank you, Judith ...
Date: 4/2/2018 4:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I do not drink for good reason, but your images are strong and good. Many wishes to you, Kai
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/2/2018 5:51:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 4/1/2018 7:58:00 PM
My hats off to you, Probir. Excellent, unique, challenging. Well-written alliteration. Salutations!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/1/2018 8:32:00 PM
Thank you, I am honoured ...
Date: 4/1/2018 6:35:00 PM
Simply beautiful. Many congrats on your top notch win.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/1/2018 8:33:00 PM
Thanks, Elaine ...
Date: 4/1/2018 5:52:00 PM
Probir, your beautiful imagery and alliteration fills me with wonderment. Congratulations on your fantastic first place win!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/1/2018 8:36:00 PM
Your alliteration power I will never reach ... Thank you for liking, Susan ...
Date: 4/1/2018 5:44:00 PM
Beautiful senses used throught! Congrats!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/1/2018 8:36:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 4/1/2018 5:17:00 PM
Well done Probir, congratulations... Mick
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/1/2018 8:39:00 PM
Thanks, Mick ...
Date: 4/1/2018 3:29:00 PM
- The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/1/2018 8:38:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine ... Sunshine is ever warm ...
Date: 4/1/2018 2:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Probir. Lovely poem! Well deserved.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/1/2018 8:41:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel ...
Date: 4/1/2018 2:41:00 PM
The alliteration added to this romantic poem, some lovely use of words.. Congratulations on your first place Probir..
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/1/2018 8:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, SO ... I am honoured ...
Date: 3/28/2018 1:59:00 PM
A very pleasant read..excellent alliteration..a winning poem!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/1/2018 8:53:00 PM
Thank you so much ... Until the win, it is you, the only one, who kindly conveyed your positive reaction through the comment, though many soupers did read ... The ice puzzled me a little ... A lot of psychology ... Sorry for the delay in the response, Vijay ...

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