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The Shovel

There, in the old gray shed, I spotted it, beside the window, hanging on a nail. With sadness, I remember it so well from that September day so long ago. An old, small shovel used, then put away... one caked with salty tears, encrusted earth, there left to hang in silent memory of its sad job from many years before. Beside the old stone wall, neath planted grass, and buried there that dark and mournful day; our twenty years of heartfelt, happy thoughts lay with him in his grave...and in our hearts. Yes, there it is...our grave for Charlie cat. There, in the old gray shed, I spotted it... the dirt still clinging there upon its blade. But now, the spring is here, perhaps its time. A scraping of this crusted shovel, yes... perhaps it's time to scrub and make it clean; grant its rejected purpose a new life. Dig in and plant new flowers 'round his grave. March 11, 2019 ~4th Place~ Premiere Contest: A Scraping of Shovels Sponsor: John Lawless Judged: 03/16/2019

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Date: 3/16/2019 12:22:00 PM
Such a wonderful nostalgic poem, Sandra. I can relate, as our sweet dog is buried in our backyard...Congrats on your win! :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/18/2019 3:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Laura, for your empathetic and uplifting comment and congrats. Yes, our pets are like family, for sure. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/16/2019 10:41:00 AM
aww so moving Sandra, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/18/2019 3:27:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, for your empathetic comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/16/2019 9:47:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Sandra! SO BEAUTIFUL and touching. Janice
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/18/2019 3:26:00 PM
Thank you very much, Janice, for your congrats and lovely comments. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/16/2019 9:33:00 AM
Sandra, this one sorta just got to me. A beautiful remembrance of a pet and the paw prints they leave on our hearts.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/16/2019 10:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, John, for the inspiring contest, my nice placement, and your uplifting, empathetic comment! Sandra :)
Date: 3/11/2019 12:43:00 PM
Great contender for the contest. Loved it :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/18/2019 3:26:00 PM
Thank you, Swetha, for your visit and uplifting comment! So nice of you! Sandra
Date: 3/11/2019 11:38:00 AM
This is good and should do very well in the contest..Good luck. BG
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/18/2019 3:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Barbara for your positive and supportive comments. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/11/2019 9:48:00 AM
Wow. Wonderful heartfelt penning. A winner for me. My best to you in the contest Sandra, xomo!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/18/2019 3:24:00 PM
Thank you very much, Maureen, for your positive and uplifting feedback! Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/11/2019 7:26:00 AM
amazing take on the contest theme sweet Sandra, good luck! :)-luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/18/2019 3:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Lu Loo! I appreciate your visit and supportive comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/11/2019 7:01:00 AM
I love your take on the contest prompt, and the hopeful turn in the last stanza. Good luck in the contest.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/18/2019 3:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Agnes. The theme was a difficult prompt, and I appreciate your positive feedback very much. Hugs, Sandra

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