The Ship

dancing golden light: the morning sun reflected on the bright blue sea; and a blue ship sails on it, its gold sails catching the breeze.

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Daver Austin

Date: 10/30/2012 1:08:00 PM

I like that "dancing, golden light." Sets up the scene nicely. Congrats on the selection. daver

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 10/29/2012 12:42:00 PM

Congratulations on being featured.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2011 11:16:00 PM

I came to YOUR last poem and saw that I'd already seen it. This beauty here. Guess what?? I just now saw that they have TAKEN DOWN all my first poems posted here. Nobody can access them all except me. I do not like this change because I used to look for poems according to "form" in the list of all my poems. But with 400 of my poems no longer listed by "form" I can only see the last 200 in their particular forms category. this really sucks. It makes me so annoyed, Jack!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/1/2011 12:19:00 AM

rereading this beauty. going off for three days, and stopping by to say BYE BYE!

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/5/2011 12:34:00 PM

Quite a stunning Tanka Jack, if for the contest, good luck to you :) Wilma

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/4/2011 6:15:00 PM

Creative and expressive write with apt images, jack

Diane Locksley

Date: 3/4/2011 5:57:00 PM

What a beautiful image you created Jack. I know this will be a winner. Best to you, Diane

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/4/2011 5:34:00 PM

Superb write Jack in Tanka form.. for the new contest.. good luck with this stunning piece ..Rick will luv.. as I do ..thankxx for your sweet comment luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2011 4:40:00 PM

Wonderful, wonderful. I just read at the contest page that these were supposed to be "beautiful" Dang, I think my Macaw poem might not be considered beautiful!!