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The Shining Stars

When the sky is dark I look for the star The star that stands out Sometimes a full moon shines Or a quarter moon Shining in the sky Close my eyes to wish On the shining star

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Date: 4/20/2024 11:17:00 PM
Hello Darlene, a lovely imagery. Have a blessed Sunday.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/21/2024 10:29:00 AM
Hello Mulu, Thank you for the lovely comment. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 2/26/2022 12:20:00 AM
Such a celestial scene you describe so well my dear friend Darlene, really truly beautiful. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 2/26/2022 7:03:00 AM
Hello Jennifer, i watch the night sky always looking for the stars and full moon. Hugs.
Date: 2/21/2022 3:48:00 AM
Read this poem out loud to the night sky and the shining star comes to you! Beautifully written! If I were the shining star, I would have appeared by now.
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Date: 2/21/2022 10:11:00 AM
Hello Swetha, Oh what a great idea. You know what? One of my wishes has come true. Now I will work on my second wish. I would be on a look out for you if you were a shining star. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.
Date: 2/17/2022 6:06:00 AM
Too true, if only we look the star is always there,
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Date: 2/17/2022 3:41:00 PM
I look at the sky every chance I get. When there is a brightest star i make a wish. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 2/17/2022 3:17:00 AM
I hope all you wish for comes true Darlene.
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Date: 2/17/2022 3:42:00 PM
Hello John, yes John one of my wishes did come true. Now I am waiting for my second wish to come true. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 2/16/2022 12:34:00 PM
I do that alot! I look for the first star i see and make a wish. I wish they would come true! very nice poem-enjoyed! thank you for your comments!
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Date: 2/16/2022 3:07:00 PM
Hello Karen, Keep trying because one of my wishes did come true. Hugs.
Date: 2/16/2022 3:05:00 AM
The night sky is full of inspirational images. You have captured the mystery perfectly...Delice
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Date: 2/16/2022 6:49:00 AM
Hello Delice, i enjoy to watch the night sky. Ienjoy to see the shinning stars with the full moon. Hugs.
Date: 2/15/2022 2:43:00 PM
To wish upon a star. Would that be awesome to get your message. Love the rain enjoyed reading, Darlene.I hope you had a wonderful Valentine’s Day
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Date: 2/16/2022 6:52:00 AM
Hello Eve, I always wish on the shining star. One of my wishes did come true. Thank you Eve. My Valentine's Day was wonderful. Thank you. Hugs.
Date: 2/14/2022 3:09:00 PM
Your eyes are the stars and your heart the moon, what with all that light, you are bright and aglow today, Happy Valentine Day dear Darlene :)
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Date: 2/14/2022 3:59:00 PM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, Thank you Mystic Rose, Rose. I hope you had a beautiful celebration today. Blessings my friend.
Date: 2/14/2022 3:01:00 PM
Hi Darlene, This is a lovely write. May I wish upon a star? Happy Valentine’s Day- Alexis
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Date: 2/14/2022 4:01:00 PM
Hello Alexis Y., yes you may. Thank you. The same to you .Darlene.
Date: 2/14/2022 12:56:00 PM
Stars can bring us luck.
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Date: 2/14/2022 1:13:00 PM
Hello Victor, yes I believe that the shinning star brings good luck. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 2/14/2022 9:36:00 AM
Very nice Darlene.
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Date: 2/14/2022 1:14:00 PM
Hello Lon, Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day friend.
Date: 2/14/2022 4:25:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your stars with us, here at Soup, Darlene. This is lovely. Joe.
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Date: 2/14/2022 6:40:00 AM
Hello Joe, your welcome. enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 2/13/2022 9:14:00 PM
LOVELY and sweet little poem, Darlene.
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Date: 2/14/2022 6:39:00 AM
Hello Andrea, thank you. Happy Valentine's Day. Hug.
Date: 2/13/2022 8:03:00 AM
Very positive wish you have Dar lene De. Lovely
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Date: 2/13/2022 12:37:00 PM
Hello Arjun, I am pleased to see you. Yes it is a positive wish. Blessings my friend.
Date: 2/12/2022 10:58:00 PM
Hope your wish comes true, Darlene, love the poetry.
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Date: 2/13/2022 12:39:00 PM
Hello Harry, you know Harry one of my wishes did come true. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 2/12/2022 10:04:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem, Darlene, especially the twist; the moon is a star. Hugs for my friends, Bill
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Date: 2/13/2022 12:40:00 PM
Hello Bill, I love the moon and the stars. My fav. is the full moon. Your poetess friend. Darlene.
Date: 2/12/2022 9:43:00 PM
Sometimes there is a star in the sky that is extra bright, I first make sure it is not a satelite and if its not Christmas, it is either my mother or father saying 'GOODNIGHT DARLING GIRL, LOVE YOU' Your poem is wonderful. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/13/2022 12:42:00 PM
Hello Jennifer, this is a wonderful way to look at the brightest star. I makes wishes on that star. Hugs.
Date: 2/12/2022 8:07:00 PM
Jiminy Cricket is looking for the wishing star too. Good luck! ~ Walt Disney
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Date: 2/13/2022 12:43:00 PM
Hello Gershon, yes good luck indeed. One of my wishes did come true. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 2/12/2022 6:57:00 PM
The quarter moon I saw looked like a smile :)
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Date: 2/13/2022 12:45:00 PM
Hello Kim. oh! i see the face of the full moon. and the full moon has a smile. Hugs.
Date: 2/12/2022 5:44:00 PM
I love to look at the sky and wish upon a star. Lovely poem. love phyl
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Date: 2/13/2022 12:46:00 PM
Hello Phyllis, I do that when I see the stars. Love, Darlene Hugs.
Date: 2/12/2022 3:10:00 PM
I love to look at the sky. This poem shines tonight Darlene :)
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Date: 2/13/2022 12:48:00 PM
Hello Heidi, i look up to the sky every night. I enjoy to look at the stars and full moon. Hugs.
Date: 2/12/2022 1:38:00 PM
Darlene, Your wish came true. You created a lovely poem, enjoyed Hugs ~ Debra
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Date: 2/13/2022 12:50:00 PM
Hello Debra, Thank you Debra yes my wish did come true.
Date: 2/12/2022 12:51:00 PM
A beautiful sky is awesome to behold Darlene! I enjoyed being reminded by your lovely poem! Happy Saturday xxoo
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Date: 2/13/2022 12:51:00 PM
Hello Mike, oh- thank you. Happy Sunday. xxxoo
Date: 2/12/2022 11:51:00 AM
Nothing more awesome to see than the night sky in all its glory. Tom
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/13/2022 12:52:00 PM
Hello Tom, yes the night sky is beautiful with the full moon and shining stars. Enjoy your day my friend.
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