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The Shed

Oh yes I recall the shed to this day the scent of old wood and dust floating in the air cobwebs in corners sun flooding in through a window a scarred wooden work table and tin cans lined up with nails and screws a coffee cup forgotten . . . I would bring precious dandelions and buttercups to be placed in some old can or jar and would sit watching for hours pondering the sketches and grand ideas . . . later we would sit on the porch swing talking the afternoon away and I held his hand so tight never wanting to let go . . . sadly life had a plan written and who am I to question destiny so, I had to let go after the funeral I stood in the shed thinking, who will want the rusty tools of an old man then I closed that creaky door forever . . . _______________________________ May 3, 2017 (Edit from April 14, 2013) Brian Strand 25 lines First Place

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Date: 5/14/2017 2:12:00 AM
How do you write so well? :D This is so good.
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Date: 5/8/2017 7:23:00 AM
Constance, you take us and show us your tender memory. Love your vivid images! Congrats on a fine win! 7
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Date: 5/7/2017 6:21:00 AM
fabulous description Constance many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/6/2017 1:57:00 PM
This is truly beautiful, Constance. You had me sitting with you in that shed....and when you closed that creaky door forever it felt like you could not bear to disturb a special memory that still lingers in the dark corners of your mind. #7 Regards // paul
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Date: 5/3/2017 6:42:00 PM
Could have been my grandpa's shed, BW. You really brought back some memories.
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Date: 5/3/2017 4:45:00 PM
That's better! Well worth the return! (you were quick too) I wish you the very best in the contest with this lovely piece, Constance!
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Date: 5/3/2017 4:08:00 PM
Hi Broken Wings , beautiful write , ' A coffee cup forgotten ' that line is a shed to a tee love this write rate 7 :)) hugs
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Date: 5/3/2017 4:03:00 PM
Is this in the making still, Constance? Great start! I'll return when you've finished then
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