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The Secret of The Rainbow

Where is the secret of the rainbow?
At the edge of one's own life?
Whence does it come, with those lovely pastel colours?
Is it a heavenly art or a mere human illusion?
Some form of an ancient creative masterpiece?
Perhaps expressionism was reassessed?

The spiritual in natural art is oft-forgotten 
in musty mists, where the soul engages
in confrontations with the deadly reaper.
The appalling midst of winter intensifies in the freeze,
and the psychology of death deepens,
for we are too much attached to worldly cares.
Characteristic emotions in cowardly conflicts.
 
One can say so very few words about 
the astute business of a measured life,
like autumn's falling bronzed leaves,
its face value is not easily perceived;
for dead leaves turn into compost,
no peaceful transition true, but a must 
that leads and helps life's renewal in spring.
 
Forget the troubled dream of dreary life,
let the seasons daub their watercolours bold and free,
the rainbow assigns a variety of mellow hues,
chooses always the brightest.
For the secret of the rainbow
a symbol of new hope lies in its Creator.
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Legros Kelley Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 4:42 PM
Wow, beautiful Victor, and the last line took my breath, I love this poem!
Allison Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 2:06 PM
such an uplifting poem Victor I always feel at peace when I see a beautiful rainbow:-) hugs jan xx
Romios Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 5:19 PM
You took you pen and created another miracle. You are so soecial! Pangie x
Proxenos Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 9:08 AM
You write such stupendous poetry Victor, I loved this poem and the eloquence with which you write,the flow and meaning of your write builds up to your last two lines, such a brilliant poem - 'For the secret of the rainbow..... a symbol of new hope lies in its Creator.' Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Kitchin Avatar
March 13, 2024 at 3:01 PM
Victor, wonderfully penned.
DiMino Avatar
March 13, 2024 at 5:37 AM
"For the secret of the rainbow a symbol of new hope lies in its Creator." Color, light, even sound for everything has its innate volume -- even death mourned rings on in memory -- difficult to believe that a consciousness, that imagines, dreams into sleep, will ever entirely rest. Quite and imaginative write -- good food for thought. Bravo!
Cunningham Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 9:03 AM
A stunning example of our creators work Victor, well written, an enjoyable read. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
George Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 2:36 AM
From a rainbow, you have moved into a highly philosophical perspective of life. Renewal is possible only through death and decay. A rainbow symbolises the beauty of life. We are to choose the beautiful from the ugly. Let us forget the troubled dreams and focus on the hope and beauty a rainbow assures. Great poem dear Victor.
Buehler Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 9:58 PM
Victor, I love this poem's beautiful message about God's loving acts, which bring us joy and hope. It touched me deeply, and is a fave. I am glad to see you posting again, and I hope you feel better soon, my friend.
Baker Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 4:16 PM
Loved your closing line, Victor. A beautifully written poem, my friend. Thanks for the uplifting poetry! Have a thoughtful day! Bill
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 3:30 PM
Hello Victor, A beautiful poem about a rainbow. I love rainbows. They are so beautiful. I wonder which it the beginning and which is the end of the rainbow. My fav. my friend. Enjoy your evening. /Darlene/
Roper Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 2:07 PM
All well thought out.Hugs my friends
One Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 1:23 PM
One of your best poems I have read Victor.. I love the spiritual nature of this poem and you have written is so profound and full of wisdom.. excellent..
Rodrigues Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 11:36 AM
I am so glad to see this posted. I always worry about you when I haven’t seen you post for several days. … for we are too much attached to worldly cares. Characteristic emotions in cowardly conflicts…oh how true this is! Love the last hopeful verse! Thank you so much for your comments. Hugs-a-million!
Anaya Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 11:29 AM
They can bring feelings of hope, faith, and renewing energy. Rainbows represent the idea of duality and remind us that even within the darkness, there is light. "The Secret of the Rainbow" is spiritual and uplifting, Victor. Enjoyed immensely!
Andresen Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 11:23 AM
- What a lovely secret, Victor :) - Next time I see the rainbow I will think of this poem ... and you :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 11:14 AM
I agree the one who created the rainbow has the secret, but He told us about the promise to mankind that the whole world would never be flooded again. I don't see rainbows very often, but one day there they were double rainbows after a storm. It was still solid cloudy but right there in the eastern sky was a double rainbow. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
Rodgers Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 9:03 AM
Hello Victor, I love how your poem delves into the enigmatic beauty of nature's phenomenon. Your exploration of its origins, whether heavenly art or human illusion, is thought-provoking. The poem seamlessly weaves themes of spirituality and mortality, inviting reflection on life's transient nature. The analogy of autumn leaves turning into compost, fostering life's renewal, is particularly poignant. It inspires contemplation and appreciation for the Creator's design. - Blessings, Daniel
Pandit Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 6:16 AM
A beautiful capture of the moment in sky--and a thoughtful dialogue, Victor.
May Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 5:49 AM
The rainbow is a covenant symbol with many hues of hope, Very nicely penned
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