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The Seasons - Rhyming Haiku

icy kiss of death frozen on sweet autumn’s breast winter’s frosty breath frozen crystal spears melting in a thousand tears joyful spring is here what were buds on trees live there dreams in lush green leaves kissed by summer breeze life begins to wane summer bursting into flames autumn’s sweet refrain ~~~ Author: Elaine Cecelia George, of Canada Written: march 1, 2011 For: Carol Brown’s Nature Rhyming Haiku contest. Awarded: First Place

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James Fraser

Date: 1/9/2016 1:00:00 PM

Haiku in rhyme, if it isn't a form - throw something into it's amidst - a little change and make it your Form - hugs always - James xx

Elaine George
Date: 1/10/2016 3:43:00 AM

Hi, James. It was originally suggested by Carol Brown and I won her contest with this. I don't know if she made it her form or not. I do however, think it would be a wonderful form.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/24/2011 12:23:00 AM

ELAINE, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! AND CONGRATULATIONS IN THE contest`" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.

James Foulk

Date: 4/6/2011 6:10:00 PM

wonder rhyming haiku, you deserved to win.

Date: 3/18/2011 4:25:00 PM

Wonderful use of imagery. Congratulations on your 1st place win!!!! Wishing you continued success with your writing my friend. Have a good weekend. Karen

Kash Poet

Date: 3/11/2011 7:51:00 AM

Congrats Elaine on your well deserved 1st place win!---kashinath

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/10/2011 3:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your win...Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/10/2011 12:26:00 PM

This is absolutely stunning Elaine, congratulations on your 1st place win in Carol's contest ;-)

John Freeman

Date: 3/10/2011 10:10:00 AM

A pleasure dear one to see you again at the top Elaine. Congratulations on your worthy first place win. Agape, Moses

Jack Horne

Date: 3/10/2011 9:57:00 AM

Beautiful. Thanks for your kind comments and congratulations to you : ) Jack

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/10/2011 9:13:00 AM

The last verse ties up the transition of seasons (and life) so well, Lainie. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/10/2011 6:07:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in my contest Lainie. Thank you for supporting my contest and my decision to run my contest my way. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/10/2011 12:03:00 AM

Autumn's sweet refrain indeed. Lovely. many congrats dear friend.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/9/2011 7:55:00 PM

Congrats..all are great, but I love spring the best..BG

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/9/2011 4:57:00 PM

Awesome Elaine. Congrtatulations to you

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/9/2011 3:38:00 PM

It feels as if it awakens each season with a beautiful song....lovely Elaine!!!! Congratulations on this number 1 poem!!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/9/2011 2:46:00 PM

and around we go!Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/9/2011 2:30:00 PM

yes for your no.1 win, elaine... my joyous thumbs up for you! :) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/9/2011 2:17:00 PM

Congrats Lainie on your first place win in Carol';s contest with a wonderful and expressive entry my friend.. enjoy with luv..

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/9/2011 1:58:00 PM

Very nice Elaine. Glad to see you at the top. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2011 1:53:00 PM

Elaine the last two stanzas were especially gorgeous. I'm glad I got to see t his winning set of haiku! congratulations.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/9/2011 1:46:00 PM

Congratlations on the first place win in the contest of carol, Elaine

Date: 3/5/2011 9:04:00 AM

Nice trip through the seasons. Good use of imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great weekend. Karen

Brian Strand

Date: 3/4/2011 11:32:00 AM

Elaine you can still read my blogs,now essayettes,on my notes page of facebook rgds Brian

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/1/2011 2:10:00 PM

Awesome, Lainie. Soup mail in a moment. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/1/2011 12:42:00 PM

Lovely lines of each Haiku to brighten the contest entries Lainie.. delicate visuals so profound in each verse ..good luck in the contest my friend..