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Poetry/Rhyme/the sea and me
Copyright Protected, ID 03-1630-749-19
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, March 19, 2024
For the International Contest, No. 1295
Sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 03/20/2024

Fifth Place

Beach Birds Sea - Free stock photo on Pixabay - Pixabay

"I love the tranquil beauty of the sea, and the anger, brutality and power " quote by _ Constance there is rapture in an empty shore where there is just nature and me the sea and the opera of its roar so blue, and cool, and totally free I love the foaming crashing crests and the dancing sun and blue sky and the birds flying from rock nests over the water- up, down, then high

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P.M. Richter

Date: 3/26/2024 1:20:00 PM

It’s always better to build on the rock vs the moving sand. Fav.

Constance La France
Date: 3/27/2024 7:35:00 AM

P.M. thank you for the comment and FAV, hugs, Constance

Stephan McBride

Date: 3/22/2024 7:32:00 PM

Beautiful scenery, love it, very captivating,

Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2024 8:26:00 AM

Stephan, thank you for the compliment, hugs, Constance

Karen Jones

Date: 3/20/2024 8:13:00 AM

This is beautiful and I love the imagery! Congratulations on your win.!

Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2024 8:27:00 AM

Karen, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, hugs, Constance

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/20/2024 8:11:00 AM

I really like this winner. Way to go. I like the flow, rhythm and rhyme within the lines. Sara K

Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2024 8:27:00 AM

Sara, thank for your the compliment, hugs, Constance

Michael Tor

Date: 3/19/2024 8:08:00 PM

Constance love the words chosen to describe the characteristics of the sea. Such an excellent theme you chose and a fine entry for this contest. Best wishes in the contest...

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/19/2024 8:03:00 PM

Dear Constance, You have beautifully captured the dichotomy of the sea's tranquil beauty and its fierce power. I love how your words evoke a sense of awe and reverence for nature's grandeur, highlighting the rapture found in solitude by the shore. Constance the wonderful imagery of crashing waves, soaring birds, and endless horizons is filled with a deep appreciation for the sea's ever-changing spectacle. I like the harmony and freedom found in the embrace of the natural world. - Blessings, Daniel

Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2024 8:28:00 AM

Daniel, thank you for the compliment, and awesome comment, appreciate, hugs, Constance

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 3/19/2024 4:09:00 PM

Very cool read!

Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2024 8:28:00 AM

AA, thank you for the compliment, hugs, Constance