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The Scars Remain

I let you make me believe your treatment of me was okay. I let you take me away, Even though you only ever wanted to go halfway. At that time, I didn’t think anything of it. Looking back, It seemed to be okay, Only because I didn’t realize how badly you would hurt me. And when you started slipping away from me, I tried to hold onto you. I held on Until I could feel the tighter I held you, The faster you wanted to leave. So I stopped holding on And I let you be. But I didn’t let go only for you to come back To me You came back When you left first you started it first. But when you came back, you didn’t think I was going to move on. You didn’t think I was able to love someone else. And to be honest, when you left me, I didn’t think I would ever be able to. You made me feel like I needed you, Like I couldn’t live without you. But when you came back, Things weren’t quite how you left them. And when I told you I moved on, That I was with the love of my life, You told me it was my fault. How I should have waited for you. How even though I found love when I wasn’t looking, That you believed you would never be able to truly love . And that made me hurt for you. But I can’t fix someone, especially someone who doesn’t want to be fixed. I tried to help you, I really did. You shouldn’t have to drown your feelings, Not the way you do. But even after everything you’ve done to me, I will always be there for you, Only in hopes that one day you’ll need me. In hopes that one day, You’ll get better.

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Date: 11/29/2024 5:48:00 PM
Raeghan, people reject others for a whole host of reasons. Hard to know sometimes. A very kind person once told me, "The chemistry wasn't there." That was a disappointment, but it was nicely given and didn't bother me. The mean dismissals were more difficult to take. Seems like you understand kindness. I'm glad of that and hope you are well. Smiles. Enjoy PS!!!!
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Raeghan Steele
Date: 12/3/2024 2:55:00 PM
Thank you so much! I will be writing more soon!! I hope you'll enjoy those as well! -R.S
Date: 11/27/2024 11:30:00 PM
"even after everything you’ve done to me, I will always be there for you" - A love-filled passion-filled poem. Beautifully written.
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Raeghan Steele
Date: 11/28/2024 10:43:00 PM
Absolutely! That has to be my favorite part of the entire poem. It carries so much meaning, and I truly believe it captures who I am as a person! I'm very grateful that you took the time to read my poem; it means a lot to me! I hope you can also find time to read some of my other works. Thank you for your kind words. Best regards, R.S.
Date: 11/25/2024 11:25:00 AM
We never really get over scars.. Your poem is poignant and relatable, capturing the painful complexity of love, loss, and personal growth. It speaks to the importance of self-care and the difficulty of balancing compassion with the necessity of letting go. It shows that sometimes, moving on is the only way to heal, and that healing can create space for new, healthier love. Your resilience and compassion are beautifully conveyed, offering a message of hope despite the hurt.
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Raeghan Steele
Date: 11/28/2024 10:40:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. I plan to post more soon, and I hope you'll like those as well! SO You truly inspire me, and I’m so grateful that you read my poems. Best regards, R.S.
Date: 11/20/2024 7:27:00 PM
I love this poem an can truly relate. Thank you for hr comments and in couragement you also have bright future ahead of you
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Raeghan Steele
Date: 11/21/2024 5:59:00 AM
Thank you for the kind words. I'd hope to show the diffrent povs of talking stages ect. I hope I was able to do that. V/R-R.S

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