The Sadness of a Secular World

There was a time 
when men built for God 
great houses of stone and glass,
with Gothic towers reaching 
to scratch Heaven's belly....

In the great hall, 
beneath the bold flying buttresses, 
people felt tiny--
yet when they cast their eyes upward, 
they  thought: This is where 
He must be... and sometimes, 
just sometimes, some of them would feel 
a twinge, even a slight shaking, a divine wisp....

Now we build huge malls with myriad shops 
offering endless promises:all lies! 
We hack humanity down 
to the lowest common denominator,
and mock those who seek 
to awaken to their immortality....

Today we can kill in the millions--
tomorrow, billions....
All that creation has brought us to, 
over such a long time,
seems for naught-- 
will God one day grow tired and finally say,
'ENOUGH!'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A. Sharma Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 1:16 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning write Ien! Brilliant work!
Wigley Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 11:44 PM
Yes, Len, I honestly believe that when the buildings that man has made to glory God were outgrown by the towers of mammon, that is where it all started to go wrong. A great write, well done. Regards, Viv
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July 26, 2015 at 4:51 PM
Len Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT**
Merryman Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 8:26 PM
He will say "Enough" when His time is right. We all should ponder our lives and ask ourselves, "Are we worshiping God or the things of this world" A great write to make you think! Congrats on your win, Len! Love, Kim
A  Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 3:04 PM
Len, A lovely win, Love **SKAT**
A   Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 2:11 PM
Len, Congrats on your win. Always ~LINDA~
Lamoureux Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 8:23 AM
I believe the answer is yes. This gives us much to ponder, for me one of the best I have read for the contest. Congrats.
Lawless Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 7:19 AM
You mean he hasn't said it yet!!!! "Gothic towers reaching to scratch Heaven's belly" ...that line alone should set the reader to many hours of pondering....
A. Sharma Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 4:01 AM
Wonderful write n win Ien! Big congrats!
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 25, 2015 at 3:34 PM
Powerful pen len! Very sad isn't it how all have changed like you state here in your poem men building and worshiping idols and have forgotten God by now most at least had. Yes, according to the book of Revelations God will have his day and say to man Enough! I really enjoyed your piece my dear friend. Have a lovely evening! :) Love and hugs! xxx D. ^O^
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