The Runaway Hoveround

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The RunAway Hoveround She was on the Hoveround going to the garden She was quite agile and of mind sound Then suddenly the hoveround decided to seek new ground It would not stop when the hand feed was released It had a mind of its own It took the old woman to the creek Where she wasn't totally alone She was surrounded by all kinds of animals And trees swayed in the breeze She was actually enjoying the summer day Now that she was not alone... unfinished/needs some work

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Howard Kerr

Date: 11/15/2023 1:26:00 PM

Sara, You have composed a nuanced, haunting piece that touches on that uncanny hidden hand we often refer to as the turn of events or happenstance. Thank you for your edifying visit and your kind reflections on Five Great Chemists. Good news is it placed in the top ten in one of Brian Strand’s contests Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/15/2023 1:42:00 PM

Awesome, Howard that you placed in the top ten with your work about the chemists. Way to go. Thank you for dropping by here to read my work which I never did get back to finish. LOL..Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 7/24/2023 10:18:00 PM

The hoveround could have sensed her longing for company. Hope it will take her back home safe..... :) Lovely image and poem dear Sara!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/25/2023 3:55:00 AM

Valsa, Yes, that hoveround understands our needs by being there for us when we need to get away. Your visits adds a special touch. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/24/2023 7:00:00 AM

Looking forward to your finishing your poem as i'v so enjoyed it thus far. HoPe all is well, hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/24/2023 7:23:00 AM

Thank you, Jennifer, for the hugs and blessings. I need to get back to this one to see if I can help it out a little. I may just leave it. LOL..Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/23/2023 4:09:00 PM

I can just see her speeding past in her hoveround! Fun!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/24/2023 3:35:00 AM

Your comments add a special touch. Thanks for all the visits. Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/18/2023 12:02:00 PM

A fun/cute ~ write/story. I saw this happen in a restaurant. She thought it was turned off and it was not. I enjoyed it. Enjoy your day.....................

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/18/2023 4:27:00 PM

Paula, One little mistake on one of these and it will bring trouble. LOL..I need to work on this one and maybe it will happen in a few days. I have got peas from the garden to do tomorrow then maybe I can write. LOL..Thanks for upliting visit. Sara