The Ruby Rose - Typo Fixed

The ruby rose that I once knew
was graceful, mild, and oh so sweet.
I put down roots near her and grew
to understand she was discreet.

Though in her garden all seems well,
the ruby rose that I once knew
has secrets that she hates to tell.
Her lovely petals hide what’s true.

I learned too well what would ensue
when one disturbs her garden’s bed.
The ruby rose that I once knew
took wrong one simple thing I said.

I got too close to what she’d hid.
Revealing thorns, she pierced me through
and all for nothing wrong I did!!
The ruby rose that once I knew.

Dedicated to a poetry mentor from long ago
Nov. 16, 2021
For the 'Rose' Poetry Contest of  Robert James Liguori

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 11/17/2021 4:51:00 PM
Wow this was really creative. Enjoyed this and congrats!
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Date: 11/17/2021 1:23:00 PM
Back with congratulations for your visceral poem Andrea! Well done! Blessings!
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Date: 11/17/2021 7:53:00 AM
"Revealing thorns, she pierced me through" - Truth about a rose. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/17/2021 6:34:00 AM
Andrea, Very intriguing, the lovely pedals you thought you knew well. -Richard
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Date: 11/17/2021 2:50:00 AM
Nicely done entry for "Rose" contest. Should never forget a rose has thorns..Delice
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Date: 11/16/2021 7:19:00 PM
So hard…we can remember the good times before the pain. Soup mail.
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Date: 11/16/2021 3:38:00 PM
See? I've returned to leave another comment, although I don't recall what I wrote in the one that disappeared. So, weird things are still happening here? I'm glad you're still posting here, and I may be, too. At least for a while.
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/16/2021 4:00:00 PM
Thank you. I'll be around.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/16/2021 3:46:00 PM
thanks, Lin. It was so strange. I was reading your comment and then it was gone. I will never understand strange things like that. Hope to see a lot of you.
Date: 11/16/2021 1:47:00 PM
I love the mystery behind the sentences you create, and I consider how you recite phrases. This is a form that you excel at. Best of luck in the competition. Thanksgiving greetings!
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Date: 11/16/2021 11:28:00 AM
Andrea, you have well described the experience of a friends betrayal stemming (sorry) from the wish to hide an area of shame and regret. I love the phrase repetition. This is a form you do so well. Best wishes for the contest. Happy Thanksgiving!
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Date: 11/16/2021 11:15:00 AM
Hello Andrea, That Ruby rose was angry so when picked up showed her thorns and it was felt and then it hurt. Hugs.
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Date: 11/16/2021 7:59:00 AM
Secret message. But one must not disturb the plant otherwise she would die. Hugs.
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Date: 11/16/2021 6:58:00 AM
I enjoy the intrigue behind the word you write, so revealing without telling all. Beware of of opening Pandora's box. Hugs, Bill
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/16/2021 1:54:00 PM
not enough room using this form to "tell the story" in its complete form. the lady ended up being loony!!
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