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The Rubber Ball

Tommy laid propped up and barely able to move, alone in his hospital bed; "He will be lucky to ever walk again", is what he heard the doctor had said. The truck driver never saw him due to the setting sun glare; He doesn’t remember that motorcycle ride - just one day he woke up in there. Then a small ball flew over the curtain accompanied by a giggling laugh; Landing close enough to his good arm so he tossed it back over the same path. Once again the colorful ball came, landing just a little bit farther away; He struggled and pushed just to reach it and send the ball back in happy play. Over and over that ball came from the giggling boy; Each time he moved a little bit more to return the colorful toy. Then finally he had to get out of bed to retrieve the rubber ball, And when he moved the curtain to return it, there was nobody there at all. His mother was surprised on her visit to see him walking about; When he told her about the bouncing ball a surprised gasp, she let out. “You remember your little twin brother, who died when you were only five? We buried a colorful ball with him that you both played with when he was alive!”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/23/2011 6:54:00 AM
Now this is a special storyline. Loved every word because things like that really do happen. Well thought out and put together, easily read and understood and a truly memorable piece. Good job myfriend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/23/2011 5:13:00 AM
Joe let us know when your novel is published as I've never been the first to walk through the doors of Barnes and Noble
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Date: 6/22/2011 12:00:00 PM
makes the hair on the back of my neck stand up, this is great, congrats on your first place win
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Date: 6/22/2011 6:18:00 AM
Wonderful story written in poetry!
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Date: 6/21/2011 5:56:00 PM
Fantastic win, really excellent write and what a story! Kudos! Light & Love
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Date: 6/21/2011 4:03:00 PM
This is a wonderful ghost story. A BIG congrats on your first place win!
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Date: 6/21/2011 8:50:00 AM
Many congrats on your win in our contest, Joe : ) Carolyn and I loved your poem. My mother's a big Tommy Steele fan!
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Date: 6/21/2011 8:45:00 AM
agsp, joe...very mysterious, very hitchcock.., what a mind and imagination you got... great stuff! :) huggs,, nette
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Date: 6/21/2011 4:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's "Ghost" contest Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2011 9:24:00 PM
Wonderful story poem, Joe. A BIG congratulations for your win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/20/2011 8:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your first placement in Carolyn's contest. For sure a winning entry. Well done. :-)
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Date: 6/20/2011 3:48:00 PM
My congratulations on the first place win in the contest of carolyn, Joe
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Date: 6/20/2011 3:43:00 PM
you beat me again Joe but with a real good poem. Congrats on the win. Mike
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Date: 6/20/2011 3:43:00 PM
This is wonderful and eerie Joe and congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/20/2011 3:19:00 PM
Congrats Joe on your well deserved first place win in the ghosts contest...awesome as usual..luv..
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Date: 6/20/2011 3:16:00 PM
Oh , this is such a tear-jerker. Im so glad you won big with it..congrats. BG
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Date: 6/20/2011 3:16:00 PM
Dear Joe, big congratulations on your first-place win in the Ghosts contest. This entry was unique and obviously both Jack and I loved it. We judged blindly and there were many good entries that did not place, so those who did should feel very proud. Love, Carolyn
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