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The Robin and the Sparrow

Oh if I were a true poet
one that could write a good rhyme
I would compose a few ones
and earn myself a dime.
 
Why, I'd write about man's folly,
as the robin said to the sparrow:
"Why are men so stupid
their minds so clouded and narrow?"
 
The sparrow cocking his head replied:
"They accumulate facts and lies,
Little caring about their true intent,
Alas, they are not really very wise."
 
The robin looked at his red breast,
remembering a Man on a cross,
how He bled, and sighed and suffered
all because of man's grace loss.
 
The sparrow nodded and smiled.
"Wisdom is not acquired by knowledge, my friend.
It comes when in our lives we've failed
and when we truly try to comprehend."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Smith Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 2:21 AM
:) Praying 4 wisdom is one of "the secrets of..." you know what I mean. :D
Daniel Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 4:15 AM
Beautiful conversation, Victor:)
McBride  Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 9:03 PM
Amen, my friend love this poem, blessed are those that have failed and seek a higher power to reveal the true truth, wisdom and knowledge not recognized of the worldly mind , May God bless, comfort, guide and fill you with His peace, love, spirit and joy in abundance: )
Messina Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 5:15 AM
Words of wisdom, Victor. Great analogy, my friend...and great poet!
Empress Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 1:50 AM
Iv been missing out i guess, i see you’ve been posting alot, another excellent poem, and i must say that opening really drew me in! So good! I love how creatively you’ve written this conversation. Its so unique and it is a poem worth getting all the accolades! Another one of your excellent writes
Legros Kelley Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 9:33 PM
Oh Victor, you are a truly great poet, this is one of the very best poems that I have ever read! I love it, it is so true! I agree, humans are not very wise, sadly, too smart for their own good, not all that wise unfortunately. This is a fave for me!!
Anaya Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 9:51 AM
I just love their conversation about the humans. Wise words said in the 4th & 5th stanzas! Enjoyed very much.
George Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 11:12 PM
A poem upholding a great truth. Wisdom is gained through comprehension. Enjoyed this story of the sparrow and the robin.
Roper Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 8:36 PM
Robin and sparrow beautiful birds . Wisdom does come
Brotherton Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 6:37 PM
So true my friend. Humans are to busy trying to outdo each other and can't be bothered by life.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 6:10 PM
Conversation of the wise!
Hawkins Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 4:08 PM
Who is the one who is called ' bird-brained." I don't think that applies to the birds, in this case, Victor. A beautiful poem penned by a great poet. It's a fave for me. Take care, Old Duck.
DiMino Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 4:01 PM
Very well said, Victor. Sound, sage advice. Blessings my friend.
Buehler Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 3:37 PM
I love this charming dialogue, and the wonderful wisdom it holds, Victor. This is a fave. :)
Rose  Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 3:32 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H74FBgOZTDw beautiful words , you may like this song :)
Baker Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 2:26 PM
You've got some very wise birds in your neighborhood, Victor. Loved the poem and the message, my friend. A FAV for my list! Bill
Dietrich Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 1:11 PM
This is a really nice anology, Victor. Also great rhyming and story.
Poet Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 10:24 AM
Victor, this is a beautiful poem. Knowledge and wisdom are not even somewhat comparable concepts in any way. A powerful exchange, and a message that was well conveyed.
Rolland Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 10:10 AM
so beautiful story, full of wisdom and science, thanks Victor
Kendrick Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 6:53 AM
Yes, wisdom is truly totally different from knowledge for sure. I like that last stanza for sure and true wisdom comes from God through the Holy Spirit. Thanks for sharing this one and for stopping by my page. I like the flow, rhythm and rhyme of your work as well. Sara
Seeker Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 6:48 AM
A deep write, Victor, superbly penned, in your inimitable style
Lane Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 6:01 AM
Oh, if only you realized that you are a true poet. Victor, your message has a much greater impact because of its personification. I see a robin, normally associated with Spring, thinking his thoughts are so important that he stands in the snow to share it. Poetic prowess! Faved
Pandit Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 5:51 AM
A potent conversation, Victor. A message well delivered.
Williams Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 4:41 AM
Beautiful words of wisdom Victor. I truly enjoyed the spirited conversation between these two wise little birds. Love and Hugs
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 2:10 AM
- Sometimes I think animals are wiser than us humans, Victor - You are a skilled poet ... always wonderful poems :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs
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