The Road Into Hoi An
it's broken, the tarmac's crooked,
and it's full of gaping mouths,
and you have to dodge them,
to save your wheels,
and God!...Jesus! the stink of
fly-blown fish hits you like an
honest politician;
in the nose and mouth:
and you want to parachute away,
into the gaping mouths and your
dad's best memories and the
stories he told;
then relief comes, in about a half-mile
down the road; and you pass the tall
palms and green feminine rice fields,
which like a girl, smell good;
and if you want, you can touch and fondle
them, and they won't slap you or make you
feel small, or say "honey, let's have a ball!"
so your'e free to carry on, into town;
and you say cheerio to the feminine fields and
gaping mouths, as they lick you with their
thousand country tongues:
and then you hit the city; and everything changes.
Copyright © Peter Lewis Holmes | Year Posted 2015
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