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the ripple dry, wetted the ears - one by one, bodies doubled over. 2/16/2023

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Date: 2/21/2023 10:01:00 PM
An ingenious take on the subject ! Exceptionally good, Kim. Congratulations !
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Date: 2/20/2023 3:39:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim. Sure are a lot of great ripple poems to see.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 6:21:00 AM
Truly! :)
Date: 2/18/2023 9:23:00 PM
"bodies doubled over" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 6:21:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 2/17/2023 8:05:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 6:21:00 AM
God bless you too, sweet Beata!
Date: 2/17/2023 1:09:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. Have a great day/weekend...............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 6:22:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 2/17/2023 9:29:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Kim -
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 6:22:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 2/16/2023 4:33:00 PM
Nice entry ... good luck in the contest, Kim. Have a great weekend! Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 6:23:00 AM
Thank you, Bill! Have a great week!
Date: 2/16/2023 11:32:00 AM
A creative write. Good Luck. Have a great day.................
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Date: 2/16/2023 10:33:00 AM
Very well-penned, Monoku, Kim. Enjoyed reading it. Good luck with the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 6:23:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 2/16/2023 9:05:00 AM
Very clever and enjoyable, Kim. :D
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 6:23:00 AM
Thank you, Evelyn! :)

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