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The Return Gift - Nursery Rhyme

Chinnu, the chipmunk got a gift, a corn, from her best friend, Hugo, the hippo. She planned to eat the tasty corn soon, and meet Hugo the next afternoon to give him a large pear that she’d stored in her burrow near the neem tree. An idea sparked in Chinnu’s brain then. She thought, ‘Why can’t I give Hugo right now his return gift?’ - but did not know how. It was late evening and getting dark, still, she hurried and leapt across the park and looked for Hugo here and there. Nowhere to find him, she felt very sad and sat near the swamp, feeling so bad. “Hello my friend”, there came a voice from behind. Chinnu turned back to find her friend right there and felt so glad. She gave the pear to Hugo, the hippo. He gulped it at once and said with a smile “what a yummy treat I got to eat!” Date: 03/10/2023 Kids Creativity And Learning Poetry Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper Rhymes checked in RhymeZone.

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Date: 9/8/2023 2:23:00 AM
Oh my, this is such an adorable children's tale. I can absolutely imagine a sweet little chipmunk and amiable hippo.. And felt like flipping the pages of lovely short story book.. You're definitely a gifted poetess and your way of storytelling is so resplendent and unique in its own way! What a beautiful treat! I always love reading your gorgeous work :)
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Date: 9/7/2023 12:52:00 PM
this is cute as can be, my sweet friend.
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Date: 8/19/2023 7:54:00 AM
Such creative storytelling , this is so cute and i absolutely got hooked on the tale, you really are a gifted writer , and your rhymes make it sound so melodious too, excellent write
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Date: 8/19/2023 6:18:00 AM
Awww I love children's stories and have written some myself. This is sweet with nice rhymes
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Date: 8/17/2023 1:41:00 PM
This is lovely..you wrote it very well..Its a shame you are not writing anymore
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Date: 4/15/2023 2:24:00 PM
Such a cute poem teaching about sharing! Loved it Anitha!
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Date: 4/14/2023 3:34:00 PM
Cute Nursery Rhyme, Anitha. It was a fun poem to read. Have a great week, my friend! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 4/13/2023 8:20:00 AM
So sweet dear Ani ! I am just getting to this charming poem of yours . Belated congratulations on your win . I remember reading nursery rhymes out loud to my children when they were young and I remember my Father reading them to me . Such great memories your poem has brought up . Sweet lessons you speak of . Sending love and hugs to you dear one . Xx Susan :)
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Date: 3/23/2023 6:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Anitha. Such creative and talent you are.
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Date: 3/20/2023 12:14:00 PM
Aaah Anitha. This is just too, too sweet. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 3/20/2023 11:51:00 AM
- Ani, congratulation on your win ... a very cute poem :) - hugs
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Date: 3/20/2023 11:14:00 AM
Congratulations Anitha on your win in Eve’s contest with this delightful story/nursery rhyme… Belle
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Date: 3/20/2023 10:57:00 AM
Congratulation on your win. A creative write. Have a blessed day..................
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Date: 3/20/2023 9:14:00 AM
Anitha, congratulation on your win. Thank you so much for creating a wonderful story for young children for the contest. Many blessings to you. Eve
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Date: 3/14/2023 6:14:00 PM
This is so creative and cute! Blessings my friend.
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Date: 3/14/2023 11:13:00 AM
Ahhh!! Reads like good contending material for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Those hippos are very huge animals and look so dangerous on TV. Sara
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Date: 3/10/2023 9:39:00 PM
Anitha, this is a cute story that shows the kindness in your heart and the gentleness of your soul. Peace to you always:)
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Date: 3/10/2023 5:14:00 AM
A story that entertains-- fit for the kids to enjoy. Exchange of small gifts goes a long way to learn of friendships and love.
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