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The Rest Will Follow

When the rain fell, my eyelids shut Please stop the rain, please stop the pain The day was long, gray skies held on Waiting for the sun to shine again For the body to move more freely To see, to feel, the comfort, warmth Live in the dreams there are to pursue Without pushing so hard to get through To accept what has come upon me To do my best, keep reaching for the skies Knowing, they will soon be clear again Knowing, I can only do the best I can --- The rest will follow --- Heidi Sands 8/19/17

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Date: 8/19/2017 10:22:00 AM
Wonderful write Heidi....best wishes
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/19/2017 10:23:00 AM
Thank you Joseph! I considered it a down one. I wasn't feeling well, but I am happy it still reached people in a positive way. I appreciate your kind comment ! :)
Date: 8/19/2017 10:06:00 AM
Wow! Heidi, Your words are so true and encouraging. It was my pleasure to read this inspirational write. Well done:-) Alexis
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/19/2017 10:23:00 AM
Thank you Alexis. I am surprised people like it, I was pretty down when I wrote it. I appreciate your comment. It has made me smile :)
Date: 8/19/2017 10:06:00 AM
accepting what is can be liberating... i love this splendid write, heidi..huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/19/2017 10:22:00 AM
Thank you Nette. I wasn't feeling well yesterday or when I wrote this in the morning today. I am thrilled people liked it anyway! :)
Date: 8/19/2017 9:42:00 AM
Beautiful message, Heidi. Your strong words of encouragement fills the heart w/much hope. Excellent poem. An instant fave. Love and hugs.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/19/2017 9:48:00 AM
Thank you Freddie. I thought it was a bit of a downer for a poem, so I appreciate your kind feedback! I hope you are having a nice weekend :)
Date: 8/19/2017 8:30:00 AM
Keep reaching for the sky--the rest will follow--wishing for happy moments!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/19/2017 9:47:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay. I will :)
Date: 8/19/2017 7:45:00 AM
I can feel this Heidi, beautiful, I keep "knowing", you will make it ,' Happy Saturday!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/19/2017 9:47:00 AM
Thank you Mike!! You made me smile today. Yesterday was a rough one. Happy Saturday! :)
Date: 8/19/2017 7:07:00 AM
Dark days come upon us, Heidi, but we know they'll pass. Your verse reads like a prayer. Nicely written.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/19/2017 9:46:00 AM
Thank you Lin. It was a quick one I wrote from what I was dealing with yesterday . I appreciate your comment :)

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