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The Realm of Rain

Life as we know it comes to a halt as Rain, king of April, begins his reign. Downpours, thunderstorms and hurricanes create chaos as he jerks our chains. Wreaking havoc and major assault each day is unique when Rain takes the reins. With pitter patter or thunderous strains he writes inclement music with refrains. Over-swelling river banks to a fault his work is often known to flood. When raindrops chase raindrops in cold blood, the clearest of streams now flow with mud. Much like a spoiled prince's strong will, King Rain's temper begins to bawl with torrents of hail and sudden squall. Ev'n weathermen's best fail to call. Because pet plans have gone downhill, the wee folk in our midst complain, "Rain, rain, go away." don't come again; as May shuts down the realm of rain. And when summer's drought brings overkill, King Rain still boasts, he holds the reins. He claims that he empties water mains, hoarding his resources, causing pains. written April 1, 2017 24 lines

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Date: 4/6/2017 8:51:00 PM
Your use of simple words and ideas are easy to digest and strike a common cord of familiarity, as we have all dealt with King Rain's temper. Emile.
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Date: 4/7/2017 8:55:00 PM
My thanks to you, Emile. I appreciate your time and energy in leaving a comment. 7 days into April and we've not have a completely dry day yet.
Date: 4/4/2017 5:05:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to comment on my poem. It is nice to know other's think about the same things you do. I like to walk in nature and it gives you time to think! I enjoyed The Realm of Rain; the rhythm was like rain itself. Thanks again.
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Date: 4/5/2017 9:41:00 AM
I appreciate your taking time to comment on my Rain piece. Thanks so much, nice to know someone is out there still reading :)
Date: 4/2/2017 11:13:00 AM
"The water.... The water...." Cheers, RAP. : )
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Date: 4/2/2017 1:03:00 PM
Thanks Doug. That's the spirit in which I wrote it.

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