The Rapids

We fought to keep our craft on course,
The river raged in protest and in vain;
We fought against the pull of nature’s force
And turned our tiny boat towards home again;
We laughed at death; when saved you can pretend.
It was a moment to remember; time stood still.
It was a moment to remember, and I will.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
December 17, 2010 at 5:11 AM
The sense of fear and end can be like an negative thrill. Both occasions get the adrenalin going, for different results. Cracking Rhyme Royal Deb....James :)
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December 14, 2010 at 12:19 PM
As the waves toss your small boat, keep hope alive, Deb. This reminds me of an old song by Don McLain. He sang about how he has lost his course and his companion in the water's (life's) turmoil. Excellent poem! Love, Carolyn
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December 13, 2010 at 6:51 PM
You know a friend of mine went rafting once. Fell out and a swirl washed him under a slight overhang and the water pinned him there. The lead man or whatever he is called stuck an oar down to him and he grabbed it. Close call.
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December 13, 2010 at 3:00 PM
Great poetry Deb... You really put the reader in the scene....well wriiten my Poet friend...luv Michael
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