The Ramblings of a House Wife



The soft clouds of cotton white
Wipe away the tears of the earth
Absorbing the pain poured and puddled below
Swarms of pestilence incubated in muddy melancholic pools of despair
From clean, fresh, white fluff, these clouds absorb the real us
Aging each one to the salt and pepper gray and musky stench of filth
Mop it up
Wring it Out
Over mountain, valley, and field
The dirty emotion and sordid feelings like mop water rain down
Yet at the dawn a clean shining light
The sorrow of the night
Washed away with clear, blue skies and
The crisp wind snap of clothes line white clouds.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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George Avatar
January 12, 2025 at 8:00 PM
We cannot prevent aging ! We are often caught in the blues of negative emotions. But with each dawn washed clean of all greyness, we too wake up and greet each day in cheer and with hope. Great images, dear Crystol.
Woods Avatar
January 15, 2025 at 7:41 AM
I'm so happy you found it worthy of a read and interpretation! Tysm! Xo
Dietrich Avatar
January 12, 2025 at 3:25 PM
Wonderful use of imagery, Crystol. I especially loved the second part. Wringing out all the filth for a new day of blue sky
Woods Avatar
January 15, 2025 at 7:40 AM
Ty Andrea! Your good opinion means a lot to me! Xo
Leach Avatar
January 12, 2025 at 11:48 AM
Your poem conveys a cycle of sorrow and renewal, reflecting the struggles and resilience of everyday life. This emotional arc gives your poem a relatable and poignant tone.
Woods Avatar
January 15, 2025 at 7:39 AM
I'm glad it does all that! Thank you for an in depth review and your thoughts! Xo
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