The Raindrop

Wild hot winds whip with abandon 
swirling down the steep canyons 
sucking moisture from the atmosphere 
spreading around, helter skelter.
  
I am withering in these California canyons
where dying trees rattle like skeletons
in the brittle heat and kindling brush. 
Fear of fire haunts the hillsides
while homesteads huddle
in suffocating valleys. 

I languish in the stagnant air
for want of refreshment 
when unexpectedly
I feel a miracle…
…a solitary raindrop
splashing down upon my head! 

The clay baked earth sighs with relief 
as it embraces the liquid staccato 
of raindrops, slap and splatter.
For each drop is a pure jewel
sent forth from heaven’s fount
reviving a parched and thirsty land.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ligon Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 4:54 PM
Great descriptions. I feel as though I'm right there, parched then tasting that first precious drop of water.
Leiser Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 6:52 PM
So glad you liked this one, Juliet! :)
Cisneros Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 9:47 PM
I like the ending of the poem. Been there and know your thrust.
Leiser Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 12:03 AM
Thank you, Norberto, for your kind comments! Glad you liked this. :)
Lee Sr. Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 4:38 AM
Refreshing written as if we're all there... A beautiful write.. Write on James
Bocsa Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 7:45 AM
You walks on beauty among gentle raindrops. Dancing in the rain...
Peters Avatar
December 14, 2018 at 1:08 PM
A beautiful write
Wolf Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 12:43 PM
The miracle of H2O, the miracle of life itself! Heartfelt expression. Nicely done! Season's best! ~ Gershon
Leiser Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 9:33 PM
Thank you, Gershon. :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 1:31 AM
I am very happy to see this lovely poem high on the winner's list Laura. Congratulations on your well deserved win! : ) xxoo
Leiser Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 9:33 PM
Thanks, Connie! :)
Carmack Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 8:08 PM
Congrats Laura!
Leiser Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 9:03 PM
Thank you, Rob! :)
Roper Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 3:29 PM
Still on :)
Leiser Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 9:02 PM
Thanks, Eve! You are so thoughtful and I’m glad I got it figured out!
La France Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 3:01 PM
Laura, just checking to make sure you can receive comments as your blog said you were having a problem. Seems okay at this end.
Leiser Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 9:01 PM
Yes, I am back to normal and thanks for checking, Constance! You are so thoughtful :)
Cornish Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 11:46 AM
Hi Laura, not surprised to find you amongst my winners once again, you deserve it!
Leiser Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 9:00 PM
Thank you again for my placement in your contest, Craig! I am thrilled :)
La France Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 9:59 AM
Laura, so beautifully penned with great emotion, I love your poem and congratulations on your win ~
Leiser Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 8:59 PM
Thank you, Constance! :)
Ruwindi Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 6:05 AM
Laura, My heartiest congratulations on your win.
Leiser Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 8:59 PM
Thank you, Kasheeva! :)
Andresen Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 12:43 AM
- Congratulations on yours: "The Raindrop" contest poem, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leiser Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 8:58 PM
Thank you, Anne Lise! :)
Elam Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 8:12 PM
Congrats Laura! Amazing imagery.
Leiser Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 8:58 PM
Thank you, Mark! :)
Gauthier Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 7:34 PM
Congrats on your top win, Laura. Well done.
Leiser Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 8:58 PM
Thank you, Line! :)
Messina Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 6:50 PM
A fitting poem of beauty and sadness...Congratulations on your win in the contest, Laura Charlie :)
Leiser Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 8:57 PM
Thank you, Charles! :)
Roper Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 6:49 PM
Nicely done,Laura, congratulations on your placement in the contest I enjoyed reading..
Leiser Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 8:56 PM
Thank you, Eve! :)
Ibeh Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 6:00 PM
Just a fabulous write, Laura!:-) Enjoyed. Congrats on your win!
Leiser Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 8:56 PM
Thank you, Edward! :)
Ruwindi Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 11:02 PM
Lovely poem, Laura. It stirred me.
Leiser Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 11:44 PM
Thank you, Kaveesha!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 3:01 PM
Your beautiful poem took me to thoughts of India and the celebrations that come when the monsoons arrive. Your imagery is stunning and sinks into the soul. My prayers are sent daily to those suffering in California as three of my children live there also. I hope Craig rates this amazing poem high Laura! : ) xxoo
Leiser Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 8:33 PM
Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful comments, Connie! It’s been quite a crazy season of fires here in California! I pray the rains will come soon!
Manassian Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 9:31 PM
Amen to that. What a beautiful piece. Hope...finally...hope. What has happened in California is so tragic. I have family there and thankfully, they weren't in the fire's path, but I think of all who have lost property, homes, and loved ones. This is a wonderful piece, Laura. Thanks for sharing.
Leiser Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 8:35 PM
Thank you, Eileen, for commenting on my poem! And also for your encouraging words. I pray we will have more rain this year in California!
Byrne Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 8:24 PM
Impressive!
Leiser Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 9:37 PM
Thank you, David! I appreciate your kind comment. :)
Safan Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 12:30 PM
I felt as the rain dropped in front of me, I could hear its drops good work
Leiser Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 1:10 PM
Thank you, Mahamad!
Horsman Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 3:38 PM
Amazing poetry, not only do you take one there, but understand, the effect that rain has on arid lands..Yes a jewel is so appropriate.
Leiser Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 6:28 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments, Harry! I’m so glad you enjoyed my poem! :)
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