The Raindrop

Wild hot winds whip with abandon 
swirling down the steep canyons 
sucking moisture from the atmosphere 
spreading around, helter skelter.
  
I am withering in these California canyons
where dying trees rattle like skeletons
in the brittle heat and kindling brush. 
Fear of fire haunts the hillsides
while homesteads huddle
in suffocating valleys. 

I languish in the stagnant air
for want of refreshment 
when unexpectedly
I feel a miracle…
…a solitary raindrop
splashing down upon my head! 

The clay baked earth sighs with relief 
as it embraces the liquid staccato 
of raindrops, slap and splatter.
For each drop is a pure jewel
sent forth from heaven’s fount
reviving a parched and thirsty land.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/18/2019 4:54:00 PM
Great descriptions. I feel as though I'm right there, parched then tasting that first precious drop of water.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/18/2019 6:52:00 PM
So glad you liked this one, Juliet! :)
Date: 1/28/2019 9:47:00 PM
I like the ending of the poem. Been there and know your thrust.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/29/2019 12:03:00 AM
Thank you, Norberto, for your kind comments! Glad you liked this. :)
Date: 1/10/2019 4:38:00 AM
Refreshing written as if we're all there... A beautiful write.. Write on James
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Date: 12/15/2018 7:45:00 AM
You walks on beauty among gentle raindrops. Dancing in the rain...
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Date: 12/14/2018 1:08:00 PM
A beautiful write
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Date: 12/12/2018 12:43:00 PM
The miracle of H2O, the miracle of life itself! Heartfelt expression. Nicely done! Season's best! ~ Gershon
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Laura Leiser
Date: 12/12/2018 9:33:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon. :)
Date: 12/2/2018 1:31:00 AM
I am very happy to see this lovely poem high on the winner's list Laura. Congratulations on your well deserved win! : ) xxoo
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Laura Leiser
Date: 12/12/2018 9:33:00 PM
Thanks, Connie! :)
Date: 11/27/2018 8:08:00 PM
Congrats Laura!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/27/2018 9:03:00 PM
Thank you, Rob! :)
Date: 11/26/2018 3:29:00 PM
Still on :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/27/2018 9:02:00 PM
Thanks, Eve! You are so thoughtful and I’m glad I got it figured out!
Date: 11/26/2018 3:01:00 PM
Laura, just checking to make sure you can receive comments as your blog said you were having a problem. Seems okay at this end.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/27/2018 9:01:00 PM
Yes, I am back to normal and thanks for checking, Constance! You are so thoughtful :)
Date: 11/26/2018 11:46:00 AM
Hi Laura, not surprised to find you amongst my winners once again, you deserve it!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/27/2018 9:00:00 PM
Thank you again for my placement in your contest, Craig! I am thrilled :)
Date: 11/26/2018 9:59:00 AM
Laura, so beautifully penned with great emotion, I love your poem and congratulations on your win ~
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/27/2018 8:59:00 PM
Thank you, Constance! :)
Date: 11/26/2018 6:05:00 AM
Laura, My heartiest congratulations on your win.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/27/2018 8:59:00 PM
Thank you, Kasheeva! :)
Date: 11/26/2018 12:43:00 AM
- Congratulations on yours: "The Raindrop" contest poem, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/27/2018 8:58:00 PM
Thank you, Anne Lise! :)
Date: 11/25/2018 8:12:00 PM
Congrats Laura! Amazing imagery.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/27/2018 8:58:00 PM
Thank you, Mark! :)
Date: 11/25/2018 7:34:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Laura. Well done.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/27/2018 8:58:00 PM
Thank you, Line! :)
Date: 11/25/2018 6:50:00 PM
A fitting poem of beauty and sadness...Congratulations on your win in the contest, Laura Charlie :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/27/2018 8:57:00 PM
Thank you, Charles! :)
Date: 11/25/2018 6:49:00 PM
Nicely done,Laura, congratulations on your placement in the contest I enjoyed reading..
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/27/2018 8:56:00 PM
Thank you, Eve! :)
Date: 11/25/2018 6:00:00 PM
Just a fabulous write, Laura!:-) Enjoyed. Congrats on your win!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/27/2018 8:56:00 PM
Thank you, Edward! :)
Date: 11/23/2018 11:02:00 PM
Lovely poem, Laura. It stirred me.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/23/2018 11:44:00 PM
Thank you, Kaveesha!
Date: 11/21/2018 3:01:00 PM
Your beautiful poem took me to thoughts of India and the celebrations that come when the monsoons arrive. Your imagery is stunning and sinks into the soul. My prayers are sent daily to those suffering in California as three of my children live there also. I hope Craig rates this amazing poem high Laura! : ) xxoo
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/21/2018 8:33:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful comments, Connie! It’s been quite a crazy season of fires here in California! I pray the rains will come soon!
Date: 11/20/2018 9:31:00 PM
Amen to that. What a beautiful piece. Hope...finally...hope. What has happened in California is so tragic. I have family there and thankfully, they weren't in the fire's path, but I think of all who have lost property, homes, and loved ones. This is a wonderful piece, Laura. Thanks for sharing.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/21/2018 8:35:00 PM
Thank you, Eileen, for commenting on my poem! And also for your encouraging words. I pray we will have more rain this year in California!
Date: 11/19/2018 8:24:00 PM
Impressive!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/19/2018 9:37:00 PM
Thank you, David! I appreciate your kind comment. :)
Date: 11/19/2018 12:30:00 PM
I felt as the rain dropped in front of me, I could hear its drops good work
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/19/2018 1:10:00 PM
Thank you, Mahamad!
Date: 11/18/2018 3:38:00 PM
Amazing poetry, not only do you take one there, but understand, the effect that rain has on arid lands..Yes a jewel is so appropriate.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/18/2018 6:28:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments, Harry! I’m so glad you enjoyed my poem! :)
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