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The Proud Green Worm Nursery Rhyme

This worm is proud to be green, I am going on thirteen. Soon it will be a party scene, plates filled with cuisine. A big cake made with beans, and hot chicken chow mein. The gifts look like in a magazine, how does a worm wear sunscreen. Sure glad I am still a teen, teens do not need to be clean. Date Written: 3/6/2023 "1 Place"

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/5/2023 8:08:00 AM

A fun story and a unique take on the green worm theme... Great rhyming, too... Well done, Paula! Congratulations on your win!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/5/2023 8:28:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like this fun write and my unique green worm. Have a blessed day...............

Len Gasun

Date: 3/25/2023 7:49:00 PM

This is so fun, sweet and beautiful my dear friend Paula. Very enjoyable to read for all. I love and enjoyed immensely. Congratulations on your first place win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/26/2023 1:27:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you found this to be a fun/sweet/beautiful/very enjoyable write. That makes me happy. Thanks. Hugs. Have a blessed day...............

Eve Roper

Date: 3/20/2023 5:56:00 PM

Paula, congratulation on your win. Thank you so much for creating a wonderful nursery rhyme for the contest. Many blessings to you. Eve

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/21/2023 3:17:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win in your fun contest. Thanks for having it. Glad you enjoyed reading "The Proud Green Worm Nursery Rhyme" write. I enjoyed bringing it to life. Have a blessed day...............

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/20/2023 12:32:00 PM

LOL Paula. Congratulations on your win! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2023 12:26:00 PM

big congrats on that placement, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/21/2023 3:12:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad to see you here reading my fun write. Have a blessed day.............

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/20/2023 12:12:00 PM

- Back with a congratulations, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/21/2023 3:10:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad to see you back reading my fun write again. Hugs... Have a blessed day.............

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/20/2023 10:55:00 AM

This beautiful poetry may be read and enjoyed by people of all ages. I enjoyed reading this, Paula, and congrats on your win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/20/2023 11:46:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun nursery rhyme write. I hope all ages will enjoy it. Have a blessed day/week...........

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/20/2023 10:53:00 AM

A fun poem/nursery rhyme Paula, children are bound to love it. Congratulations on the win in Eve’s contest

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/20/2023 11:45:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed this fun nursery rhyme write. Have a blessed day/week...........

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/20/2023 8:47:00 AM

Lovely poem. Hearty Congratulations.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/20/2023 10:46:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun Green Worm write. Have a blessed day/week...........

Jim Slaughter

Date: 3/16/2023 10:20:00 AM

I never had "bean cake" before, but I do like "chicken chow mein". A centipede I can imagine, but how does a worm wear sunscreen? Love the last line. BOL in the contst, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/19/2023 10:14:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your BOL. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun Green Worm nursery rhyme. I also enjoy "chicken chow mein." Mashed up beans make a cake moist. A worm wears sunscreen in a write or dream. Hooray!!! Have a blessed day...........

Valsa George

Date: 3/7/2023 8:05:00 PM

A fun read . A very enjoyable nursery rhyme . All the Best, dear Paula !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2023 8:00:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun Green Worm nursery rhyme. I enjoyed writing it. Have a blessed day...........

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/7/2023 1:30:00 PM

So cute and very charming Paula! Your right about the bathing! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings for you and your very creative green worm!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2023 7:57:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you like my cute/fun green worm write. We are both having a ton of ton. Hahaha........ Have a blessed day...........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/7/2023 7:32:00 AM

- A fun and wonderful poem, Paula ... I'm working on my contribution ... but I can't quite find the thread :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2023 7:54:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like my fun write. I can't wait to read the one you write. I know it will be great. Hugs. Have a blessed day...........

Stephan McBride

Date: 3/6/2023 10:54:00 AM

Great poem, very joyful and fun, love it : )

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2023 7:51:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you love this fun Green Worm write. I enjoyed bringing it to life. Have a blessed day...........