The Promise

Sometimes love
is not my first impulse,
guts and bandages
a lethal cocktail
for the heart;
when good-times
have lost
much their appeal,
one never seems 
too old
for heartbreak--

A great deal of my life
spent in hospitals
and transit vehicles,
counseling the poor
and possessed;

I think, for me
a hillside
as did Frances,
were those friends
not so difficult to pin down 
most everything now-days 
subjugated by lawyers—or a lounge chair
at the foot of an old fig tree
in my yard (we have
a shady bet between us
about longevity) 
my personal preference
to warning bells
and the hiss of fake air,
while his aversion
to ants vs firewood--

we have
a promise.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 8:46 PM
I just love this emotionally thought provoking poem, Joe. Your imagery is superb. I love the relationship (a shady bet..), and the visual, of you and the fig tree.. being there for each other in your final moments and helping each other to accept death with dignity.. a profound poem and a fav! Warmest wishes always, my friend.. ~Susan
DiMino Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 7:26 PM
Thank you, Susan; strange, but I often reveal my deeper feelings with nature other than human. I do the same with my cats. Of course, all poets and poetess are on my extended family-list as well:) Blessings my friend!
Dietrich Avatar
May 17, 2018 at 5:04 PM
Deep and reflective, JOe. A good example of free verse writing.
DiMino Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 9:10 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea; that assurance coming from such a splendid writer as yourself, means a lot to me.
Leiser Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 8:11 PM
A most intriguing poetic write, Joe, and one to ponder upon. Enjoyed the read!
DiMino Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 9:11 AM
Thank you, Laura; have a beautiful day!
Goff Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 5:18 PM
Contemplative...yes, much to think about, nice work, Joe!
DiMino Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 8:43 AM
Hi Jim; I have a running joke with my wife, which involves the old fig tree in our backyard. I tell her, I and the fig tree have a contest as to who will live longer...and also a promise to take care of one another in those final moments. No hospital for me--just his blessing of a little shade. No ants and slow decay for him--my promise to let him die as a viking. So much fear of death in this world...which is really a fear of life. Blessings my friend! Joe
Flower Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 9:36 AM
Quite deep and makes me think, yet beautifully written!
DiMino Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 11:53 AM
Hi Moon; very kind of you. Thank you. Blessings my friend.
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