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The Problem with Leather

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I once met a girl whose name was Heather, whatever she wore ‘twas always leather. It rained, it poured, we got all wet, She said, “this leather smells like sweat”, Before each date, she now checks the weather.

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David Fisher

Date: 2/29/2024 6:17:00 PM

Good one, Bill. Once I saw Heather and leather in a limerick, I was sweating, too! Phew

Bill Baker
Date: 2/29/2024 10:46:00 PM

LOL, cute, comment, David. It can have that effect. :-) Thanks for the visits and comments, today. Have a great week! Bill

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 2/29/2024 5:47:00 PM

A fine limerick, Bill. She better watch out, I hear leather shrinks after it gets wet. Wouldn't want her mini to go maxi.

Bill Baker
Date: 2/29/2024 10:47:00 PM

LOL, the comments on this one are fun to read. Have a pleasant week, my friend. Bill

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/29/2024 1:16:00 PM

Bill, your limerick is truly exceptional. It showcases a delightful and astute narrative, replete with unforeseen turns. The amalgamation of humor and artful rhyme structure renders it a pleasurable and captivating literary piece. It serves as a charming testament to the laughter that manifests through life's surprises.

Bill Baker
Date: 2/29/2024 1:36:00 PM

Still trying to get better at this form, I still have plenty of room for improvement. :-) Life can be very surprising sometimes. Your poet friend in Texas, Bill

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/29/2024 11:14:00 AM

This write has a rank quality, all its own I feel I trust it will 'wear well' over time Bill.' A toughie to comment on.'

Bill Baker
Date: 2/29/2024 11:47:00 AM

Trying to write a few limericks, Joe. They don't mesh with my normal thinking very well, but I'm trying. I'd have a little trouble commenting on this one myself, my friend. Have a great week! Bill

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/29/2024 7:25:00 AM

Hello Bill, This is a delightful and witty tale of unexpected twists. The humorous narrative and clever rhyme scheme make for an enjoyable read. It's a charming reminder of how life's surprises can bring laughter. Maybe she needed to be Teathered at the hitching post. Well done! - Blessings, Daniel

Bill Baker
Date: 2/29/2024 8:03:00 AM

Good one, Daniel, she would then say nay! Have a great week, my friend. Bill

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/29/2024 6:50:00 AM

A fun/creative Limerick write with a good picture. Leather is too hot to wear. Have a fun/great day...............

Bill Baker
Date: 2/29/2024 8:02:00 AM

I agree, too hot to wear, Paula. Leather does make me feel really hot and it's very confining to boot. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/29/2024 5:22:00 AM

I hate getting wet, but so is getting wet in sweat. Hope she had plenty of zips. Quite a fun limerick.

Bill Baker
Date: 2/29/2024 8:01:00 AM

It certainly wasn't as pretty of a picture as the before photo above. lol Have a pleasant week, my friend. Bill

Robert Schatz

Date: 2/28/2024 10:57:00 PM

Something about "lol" bothers me. But I really did lol at this Bill!

Bill Baker
Date: 2/29/2024 7:58:00 AM

A little odd to my normal way of thinking, but I thought it had a nice twist at the end. Thanks for the comment on lol, Robert. Have a great day! Bill

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/28/2024 7:51:00 PM

Well, if she has to disrobe, I hope she carries a feather with her. Sal Lee Rand

Bill Baker
Date: 2/28/2024 9:29:00 PM

That comment got a chuckle out of me, gw. She's going to need much more than that. lol BB