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~In placid thought her beauty lies in wait for what the future holds in dormant trust. Such youth a squander, time cares not her fate for loveliness displayed is merely dust. In pomp attire, to woo a fancy’s eye, embellished with the floral gifts of spring, the pigments fade beneath the azure sky portrayed upon the hills where swallows sing. Though she will be adored but never see this suitor without hope for love so sweet, her aura beckons, posed eternally, and ever will I hope her heart to beat. A graceful brush strokes beauty into art but never will it paint a beating heart. Portrait: Margaret "gretchen" Strong by Frank Benson 1-7-2023

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Date: 4/5/2023 10:40:00 AM
I love this painting and your lovely words paint another beautiful picture Mark! This painting reminds me of the painting of Monet's wife, Camille, at Trouville on the Fleurie Cote. Your poem is such loveliness! Congratulations on your win. Happy Easter!
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Date: 3/27/2023 11:21:00 PM
Ahh brilliant! Really well written
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Date: 3/27/2023 7:54:00 PM
I love how you ended such eloquent piece! Congrats!
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Date: 3/27/2023 6:54:00 PM
This is beautiful, Mark, you have painted the portrait alive:)
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Date: 3/27/2023 6:16:00 PM
Beautiful and so captivating! Enjoyed every line, Mark ~ warmest congratulations on your win
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Date: 1/24/2023 8:22:00 AM
Your lines are written with the same wispy beauty and the strokes in the painting. Nicely done, Mark.
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Date: 1/23/2023 11:54:00 AM
Jedi master of the sonnet. Beautiful, effortless flow from line to line... I can only hope to emulate one day!
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Date: 1/23/2023 10:17:00 AM
Mark, this poem is as lovely as the woman in the painting with graceful lines of beauty infused with the longing heart of the poet. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/22/2023 1:44:00 PM
Mark, a beautiful sonnet for a beautiful portrait that ends with a thought-provoking statement: "A graceful brush strokes beauty into art ~ but never will it paint a beating heart." Congratulations on your win on Mile 24 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Two more miles to run before the Qualifier's Final Placement Contest!
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Date: 1/7/2023 10:31:00 AM
How you drew me in with the eloquent description of this painting Mark which I had seen but never fully appreciated till today.
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