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The Porch Railing of My Childhood

Mrs. Peligio was a swearing machine We would run and throw ourselves in the crawl space under the shed pretending to look for a softball when we saw her and this included our mother. Our neighborhood was small. Normal families with a dad, and one-woman-one-non-playing-child family, which was strange for a small town in Middle-Earth United States in the 60’s. Our front porch had the tallest railing in the world around it. I was always on that dare-devil railing, doing plays for the other kids. My sister refused to be a boy, so I had to play Peter Pan and Captain Hook, jumping up and down off that high railing, over and over to change my outfit. We had to pretend to see the other one. Once upon a time, I dragged my three children to the old neighborhood. Mrs. Peligio, wandered by to see what we were about. She did not remember me. Not surprising as we had lived there from birth to high school graduation. One of my children pointed to something and yelled, “That’s the railing!” My three grown darlings were in heavy laughter now, laughing so hard they were clutching their sides and sobbing. The higher-than-the-tallest-cathedral porch railing I had told them about for forty years had completely replaced herself. A sneaky carpenter had taken off the sky-scraping railing and replaced it because it was no higher than a four-year-old child. Memories, nothing like them. Written 11-30-2018 Contest: My Youth Sponsor: Craig Cornish

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Date: 12/15/2018 3:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Caren! I love the tale of your 'dare devil railing' ! I remember going to my granddad's house in Columbus Junction IA after his funeral, and the house was so much smaller than I remembered! I guess time plays tricks with your memories-
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 12/16/2018 2:08:00 PM
Sorry, I meant Muscatine-
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 12/16/2018 1:20:00 PM
It's my dad's hometown - I've never lived there but have visited (and have been to Moline, too!)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/16/2018 5:49:00 AM
Wait a second Michelle. You have a Columbus Junction Iowa connection! You do know I am from Chariton Iowa and there are about six of us who regularly get on here who are from Iowa right? Good grief! How had I missed this?
Date: 12/15/2018 10:50:00 AM
Sincere congratulations on your win in Craig's "My Youth" contest, Caren - blessings and best wishes to you and yours for a wonderful holiday season! Keep the wonderful ink flowing, my friend! :-) <3
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/15/2018 12:46:00 PM
Thank you Greg, I will, as I have no idea how to do otherwise. Please have a wonderful holiday! Know that blessings are always sent your way, my friend.
Date: 12/2/2018 7:58:00 PM
I love this one; things seem so much bigger when one is little; I've shocked myself a few times when I've gone back and looked at the past, too. I was never peter pan but, I do remember wearing a beach-towel-cape and playing, Superman while jumping off of everything and thinking I was flying. Childhood is so much fun even when looking back, as an adult.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/2/2018 10:09:00 PM
I loved mine in so many ways. Other ways, maybe not so much. All that gardening in the summer. UGH! Couldn't we just buy an 18 cent can of green beans?
Date: 12/1/2018 8:35:00 AM
Hahahahaha! I've had memories like that... shame on that sneaky carpenter! ;D
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/1/2018 9:06:00 AM
I could not BELIEVE it. It was only 2 ft off the ground not the 49 ft I remembered.
Date: 11/30/2018 11:07:00 PM
Every thing seems larger when your a child even life itself. great story Caren
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/30/2018 11:11:00 PM
Thank you Wren. I had to chop this one in half, as when you get into childhood stuff so much comes up and out that you are not expecting.

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