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The Pool Player

A pool player taking a snooze
Had a dream that his match he would lose.
	Since his bladder would squeeze
	He was minding his pees
But he should have been minding his cues!


for Andrea's "Show Me the Funny" contest

Copyright © Ilene Bauer | Year Posted 2012

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July 18, 2013 at 10:46 PM

I B., LOL, thanks for the smile... congrats! love ~SKAT~

Connie Gildersleeve

July 15, 2013 at 9:45 AM

Ilene nice one. Congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A

July 14, 2013 at 5:42 PM

congratulations in the contest.... mighty funny... love LINDA

July 14, 2013 at 11:50 AM

You have fantastic wit...love the symbolic use of Pees and Cues... funnnnyyyy :) Congrats on your win :)

July 14, 2013 at 11:18 AM

EXCELLENT write... LOL... Congrats on your win!

July 14, 2013 at 2:43 AM

Well thought out, i loved it ...Seren

Andrea Dietrich

July 13, 2013 at 11:56 PM

aha, so you had it before in my limerick contest a long time ago.(just reading old comments on here) I did not even remember that. But I am glad you made another win with me in this contest. You were up against a lot of different forms and great humor and you did fantastic to be in my top ten. Congratulations.

Carrie Richards

July 13, 2013 at 9:03 PM

This is sooo cute!!!! Loved it !

June 10, 2012 at 7:16 AM

Yes ,very witty Limerick and nice thinking!Congrats on your win!

Tanya Harrington

June 9, 2012 at 12:29 PM

Congrats, very funny...Tanya

June 9, 2012 at 12:26 PM

Should have rated at the top. Great limerick. Love, Joyce

June 9, 2012 at 11:30 AM

Congrats, Ilene. Excellent. Enjoyed. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 9, 2012 at 7:07 AM

Congratulations on your win in Andrea's "Limerick" contest Ilene. Love, Carol

June 9, 2012 at 6:58 AM

ilene, congrats on your win..David

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

June 9, 2012 at 5:23 AM

Congratulations on a fine limerick xx

June 9, 2012 at 4:39 AM

Congratulations on your win! Very funny... Terry

Andrea Dietrich

June 9, 2012 at 12:29 AM

Love the play on words in yours, Ilene. Big congrats in my limerick contest.

March 6, 2012 at 5:53 PM

Fantastic sense of humor!

March 4, 2012 at 10:13 AM

Was the guy's name "Wisconsin Skinny"? Good limerick Ilene.

Kathryn Collins

March 4, 2012 at 9:38 AM

You are so funny, ilene and such a delight! love, Kathy

Poet Destroyer A

March 2, 2012 at 6:17 PM

Ilene,, fun limerick~have a nice one ;-)* PD

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 2, 2012 at 2:36 PM

Nicely done.....always a smile. - oxox love Anne-Lise - Have a lovely weekend Ilene.

Andrea Dietrich

March 2, 2012 at 11:03 AM

hahaha, you did a good one!!!

March 2, 2012 at 9:38 AM

soo funny and fascinating, ilene.. if for a contest, you have a winner... :) huggs to you! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 2, 2012 at 9:12 AM

cleverly crafted Ilene and a fun read too.. good luck if for a contest on PS.. amazing visual luv..

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