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"THE POET AND HIS MUSE" FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, MY PHOTO, ©

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Once upon a time, a frustrated poet that had not written for a while, turned towards the heavens and at the top of his voice cried: " Why oh you divine Muse have forsaken me and now, able I am not, to write even a single line?" Calmly the Muse looked at him with compassion and thus replied: "Dear child of mine, I would like you to recall the days when, free my inspiration, used to flow into your heart like a river of feelings and emotions that you so artfully were putting on paper creating thus poetry of great beauty that was by all admired. "Lately though" she continued "You do not come to me for inspiration anymore, as you did in those days, instead you come demanding from me to offer you something that I have never denied: my affection! But you do it without any humility." then she added: "Instead, you come with arrogance trying to put words in my mouth, ordering me to arrange them in the way that pleases you and not in the way poetry itself would like. Therefore, my advice to you, that suppose to be the voice of my inspiration, must understand that I made you mute out of love and respect for poetry, not for any other reason, till you humble yourself enough before this marvelous gift that God has offered you and me which is the language that in heavens it is spoken, the language that to you mortals, as POETRY it is known!" © Demetrios Trifiatis 18 January 2018

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Date: 1/24/2018 6:48:00 AM
LOVE THE DEPTH, WISDOM AND TRUTH IN THIS FINE POEM MY FRIEND. My Muse often leaves me when I refuse to write exactly what she dictates but Iemid her that I am not her slave, and she is not mine--we both serve poetry. She sees the light for a time and hen forgets--or is it me that forgets. I forget.... A fav my friend, great poetry.....
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Date: 1/19/2018 4:17:00 PM
For me a poem engages both our intellect and emotions. It is a bridge of sorts that some people are unable to cross. I very much enjoyed this piece Demetrios. I also like the metaphor of language. For me poetry is the soul crying out to be heard. Sadly some don't speak the language or understand it.
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Date: 1/19/2018 7:25:00 AM
omg.... you wrote a long poem! Awesome story telling and something so many poets can relate to..
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Date: 1/19/2018 10:22:00 AM
I am sure you have written many long poems, I have not seen one for a while.. I think it is a great story and I love when you write like this..
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/19/2018 7:37:00 AM
Why are you surprised I wrote a long poem my friend, S.O. when there are at least 500 longer poems than this I have written out of 1812? Writing short poems is a choice for it is easier to pass a message! The ancient Greek philosophers have proved that " Laconic writing is a sign of wisdom" Of course this doesn't mean I am wise but I have adapted their style! Mind that is more difficult to say many things in few words than in many!Thank you!
Date: 1/18/2018 11:33:00 AM
A poem to write, feel and learn ... Poetry is an intellectual cultivation ... Nothing can be forced out from a sound thought system , leave alone poetry ... poetry is an intellectual addiction ...
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/18/2018 12:41:00 PM
So my dear friend, Probir , "...Poetry is an intellectual cultivation ...addiction..." from that declaration one may conclude that when someone writes a poem for the woman he loves and praises her beauty and expresses his undying desire to live with her and share his life with her and even to give his life for their love, you are telling us that this person just makes an intellectual statement devoid of feelings? I still think that " Poetry without feeling resembles a fair rose without fragrance!" Thank you for taking the time !
Date: 1/18/2018 7:59:00 AM
- The words come when the heart has something to say :) - Great written, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/18/2018 8:05:00 AM
So true my friend, Anne-Lise! Some, unfortunately, try to dictate to the heart what to say! Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment! Hugs xxx
Date: 1/18/2018 6:00:00 AM
Loved it friend..a lesson for us all..softly delivered. God write, Demetrios.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/18/2018 7:22:00 AM
A lesson has meaning if it is applied my dear friend, Vijay! Much appreciated your visit and comment! Thank you!
Date: 1/18/2018 5:43:00 AM
One should always accept a gift gratefully, and graciously. One should never take for granted a gift from God, and allow the ego to creep in. Brilliant personification like always dearest friend. Thank you for reminding us of our gifts....Maria xxx
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/18/2018 7:21:00 AM
You are so gracious dearest friend, Maria and your comment so precious to me! Thank you very much! XXX
Date: 1/18/2018 4:45:00 AM
It is better to receive a gift gracefully without asking, than to beg with arrogance and be ignored Regards Tom.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/18/2018 7:18:00 AM
So true my friend, Tom! Thank you!

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