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The Picture On The Parlor Wall

There by the window is a huge portrait It is quite whimsical yet dark despite sunshine The eyes seem to follow you when you walk by And it is rumored the woman was blind But she had a sixth sense telling fortunes And it is as if her portrait still reads you I feel her soul seeping in the photo like an old tea bag Such a handsome woman who had no glasses Her eyes seem to always see despite the blank stare Beneath the fluff of eyebrows peering below her huge hat Her dress was colorful once now faded by time She was known to be kind but eccentric but A bit rebellious for a woman of her day Each time I look at the eyes I feel a strange sensation Like she is not finish telling fortunes Was she greeted by the death angel upon her end Or did she rebel and descend to hell Perhaps we find out when it is our time.

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Date: 10/21/2024 10:20:00 AM
This one makes the hair on the back of my neck stand up, Karen, especially the eyes that seem to follow you around the room! Wonderful images, mystery and storytelling. You did a great job with a new poetic form. MORE! MORE! Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
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Date: 10/9/2024 4:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning placement, Karen. You brought your portrait to life for me.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/9/2024 5:03:00 AM
I pleasantly surprised it did as well. Thanks Lin.
Date: 10/1/2024 3:37:00 PM
I like this story and poem. It has a lot of mystery. Who was she? Good luck with the contest.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/1/2024 4:34:00 PM
Hilda thanks for your interest and contest wishes. She is a figment of my imagination. lol I really drew a blank for this contest and had no idea until I created a story in my mind's eye.
Date: 10/1/2024 12:38:00 PM
I love the questions in this, gives an evocative touch really! And youve written very well with descriptive language! Its good to read so many write in so many different ways and your approach to the prompt is so very unique from the very first line, left me hooked! I did a bit different to you and some others iv read but I absolutely loved reading this! Sending you light always dear Karen! Talented soul! Best wishes
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/1/2024 1:24:00 PM
Hi Inky! Oh my I struggle with free writing unlike you. I appreciate your kind comments means a lot as I am very insecure when trying other styles. I can't wait to read yours! Headed to your page now.

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