The Picture On The Parlor Wall

There by the window is a huge portrait
It is quite whimsical yet dark despite sunshine
The eyes seem to follow you when you walk by
And it is rumored the woman was blind
But she had a sixth sense telling fortunes
And it is as if her portrait still reads you
I feel her soul seeping in the photo like an old tea bag 
Such a handsome woman who had no glasses
Her eyes seem to always see despite the blank stare
Beneath the fluff of eyebrows peering below her huge hat
Her dress was colorful once now faded by time
She was known to be kind but eccentric but 
A bit rebellious for a woman of her day
Each time I look at the eyes 
I feel a strange sensation
Like she is not finish telling fortunes
Was she greeted by the death angel upon her end
Or did she rebel and descend to hell
Perhaps we find out when it is our time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kauffman Avatar
October 21, 2024 at 10:20 AM
This one makes the hair on the back of my neck stand up, Karen, especially the eyes that seem to follow you around the room! Wonderful images, mystery and storytelling. You did a great job with a new poetic form. MORE! MORE! Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
Lane Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 4:28 AM
Congratulations on your winning placement, Karen. You brought your portrait to life for me.
Jones Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 5:03 AM
I pleasantly surprised it did as well. Thanks Lin.
Greenhough Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 3:37 PM
I like this story and poem. It has a lot of mystery. Who was she? Good luck with the contest.
Jones Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 4:34 PM
Hilda thanks for your interest and contest wishes. She is a figment of my imagination. lol I really drew a blank for this contest and had no idea until I created a story in my mind's eye.
Empress Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 12:38 PM
I love the questions in this, gives an evocative touch really! And youve written very well with descriptive language! Its good to read so many write in so many different ways and your approach to the prompt is so very unique from the very first line, left me hooked! I did a bit different to you and some others iv read but I absolutely loved reading this! Sending you light always dear Karen! Talented soul! Best wishes
Jones Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 1:24 PM
Hi Inky! Oh my I struggle with free writing unlike you. I appreciate your kind comments means a lot as I am very insecure when trying other styles. I can't wait to read yours! Headed to your page now.
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