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The Picnic

The sun peeked out from darkened clouds
And morning light appeared
But soon a thunder clap was loud
And rain came as we feared

10/16/2021
Bite Size Poem no23
Line Gauthier, Sponsor

Copyright © Janis Medders Tobechi | Year Posted 2021

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Paulette Calasibetta Date: 11/1/2021 11:15:00 AM Hi Janis, congratulations on your win! Love this....fabulous imagery! Blessings, Paulette Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 10/24/2021 11:33:00 AM super imagery, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 10/23/2021 6:07:00 AM Janis, lovely poem and congratulations on your win in Line's contest ~ love and serenity _Constance Login to Reply

Francis J Grasso Date: 10/23/2021 3:37:00 AM Congratulations on this lovely winner, Janis! ...Fran Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 10/22/2021 7:50:00 PM Dear Janis, your vivid imagery bring me to the center of the soaked picnic scene. Simply splendid! Congratulations for your excellent in Line's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 10/22/2021 10:14:00 AM Sounds like a picnic in the northwest! Congratulations on your win Janis! Blessings to you! Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 10/22/2021 3:01:00 AM Ah! Another picnic ruined... well penned, Janis, congratulations:) Login to Reply

Beata Agustin Date: 10/21/2021 11:46:00 PM Congrats! What matters most is the joy that prevails. God bless you. Login to Reply

Christuraj Alex Date: 10/21/2021 11:04:00 PM Interesting. Though the purpose was affected, the mood is very jovial. Beautiful work! Login to Reply

Karen Jones Date: 10/21/2021 10:13:00 PM This is lovely. Congrats on a win Login to Reply

Rico Leffanta Date: 10/17/2021 11:52:00 AM If only the rain washed away the mosquitoes with the ants! Enjoyed! (The Captcha code is "PBS"?) Login to Reply