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The Persimmon Tree

The Persimmon Tree This time of year my feet often turn toward an old home down the way that now stands empty. In the back yard there is a weathered persimmon tree seemingly standing guard over the remnants of the garden. The copper leaves gradually fall away, one by one, revealing the golden globes that hang on tightly.. waiting until the last minute to offer themselves to the sleepy earth. I never fail to find this display astounding, ornaments hanging from nude branches, looking for all the world like someone had placed them there to decorate the season. I am not alone in wonderment, I often find a small gathering outside the sagging gate, come to share the breathtaking beauty of this yearly gift.

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Date: 3/26/2009 8:17:00 AM
Congratulations on the double feature. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 3/26/2009 5:20:00 AM
We had a persimmon tree in the yard when I was a child. Oh how I loved to gather them for my grandmother to make her delicious bread. It was a tradition. I remember waiting for them to be hanging there on the limbs alone, it was a sign that it was time to gather the fruit for grandmas bread. Great imagery. wonderful write. Congratulations on it being featured this week. Thanks for the reminder of beautiful memories. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/25/2009 10:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured! Kirstie
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Date: 3/25/2009 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. So special when you get 2 featured in the same week.Love, Carol
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Date: 3/24/2009 8:47:00 PM
Dear Barbara Barbeeg,Congratulations on YOUR POEM "The Persimmon Tree" being a Feature POEM this week I don't think I have seen a Persimmon tree until YOU opened my eyes with this descriptive POETIC ART ALWAYS YOURS...HG
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Date: 3/23/2009 1:33:00 PM
Excellent imagery Wow I love this poem Congratulations on your featured write! Love Laura :)
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Date: 3/23/2009 10:30:00 AM
Two featured this week...hooray for you, Barbara!! Both are worthy of reader's enjoyment!! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 3/23/2009 12:47:00 AM
Congrats on your feature this week BG.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/22/2009 5:50:00 PM
Wow. So sorry I ever missed this beautiful poem. A DOUBLE FEATURE!!! Congratulations and well deserved! Way to go! Love, shar
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Date: 11/20/2008 5:31:00 PM
I've never seen a persimmon tree and don't think I've ever even eaten one. Are they sweet? But isn't it wonderful when we can spontaneously share our awe of nature with others!! Wonderful write here, Barbara!
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Date: 11/19/2008 1:18:00 PM
An excellent piece of free verse... Lovely descriptions and marvelous word use. BRAVO Barbara! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 11/19/2008 9:51:00 AM
A wonderful job with this very descriptive write. I love the second line beacuse I can see that old home sitting bare. I really enjoy this.
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Date: 11/19/2008 6:25:00 AM
Beautifully descriptive poem! I love persimmon trees...don't like to eat the persimmons though.
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Date: 11/18/2008 11:55:00 PM
Yikes! Thanks for highlighting the ambiguity in my carol, Barbara. It didn't mean what you thought, so I have removed it while I rethink. Love, Nigel
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Date: 11/18/2008 11:40:00 PM
Interesting th imagery the lights our minds Barbara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 11/18/2008 6:25:00 PM
I love to see the persimmon trees this time of year. I'm not crazy about eating those pear shaped persimmon, but I absolutely love eating the apple persimmon (Fugi , I think they are called)....only to buy them in the store they cost an arm and leg!! I need to grow my own tree!!:) ~very well done, Barbara! Carrie
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Date: 11/18/2008 3:55:00 PM
Wonderful descriptive writing, Barbara. I would love to see that tree too! I have a passion for trees. My place poem was a memory from the UK. I used a little poetic licence because the packhorse bridge is not as close to the waterfall and pool as I described it, but both spots are magical (Yorkshire of course!). Love, Nigel
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