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Persimmons

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THE PERSIMMON LADY
just beyond the sagging gate Mrs. Bodine’s old house stands, empty. in the back yard weathered persimmon trees stand guard over the garden’s remnants. leaves rust-red in October, ochre and bronze scatter down from the persimmon’s hard slender limbs. copper leaves slowly falling away, one by one their orange-red globes hanging on patiently. this display of ornaments hangs from nude branches as if Mrs. Bodine left them there to decorate the season. memory of persimmon's mellow sweetness permeates into my tongue taking me back to my cozy childhood. “Ripe ones are soft and brown-spotted… sniff the bottoms…the sweet ones will be fragrant.” we gathered persimmons in yard-wide baskets filling them with mounds of just picked persimmons. autumn evenings spent eating persimmons with Mrs. Bodine, her fireplace warm and fragrant with wisdom and persimmon leaves. “Peel the skin tenderly, she said, “not tearing the meat. Chew the skin, suck it, and swallow. Now, eat.” the meat of the fruit sweet and jelly-soft, a luscious topping for her crisp buttered bread. like its namesake, Persimmon Tree is sweet, evocative~ consume all of it taking it to one’s heart.

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Date: 6/9/2025 7:56:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Yellow Rose
Date: 6/10/2025 5:08:00 AM
thanks for your visit, Beata, and for your welcoming words. You're most kind. Have a blessed day!
Date: 6/9/2025 6:26:00 PM
You just recently arrived, and I found you by simply bouncing around Soup w/o a plan! Not only did I find you but a delightful, simply beautiful poem, one I wanted to inhale, taste, sit inside of. Each line, image, all beautiful. Hope you'll be fulfilled on Soup. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Yellow Rose
Date: 6/10/2025 5:09:00 AM
awwww, a happenstance, poetic encounter! I love synchronicity. Thanks for your visit and kind words. Sending you hugs for this Tuesday, Yellow Rose
Date: 6/7/2025 5:23:00 PM
Your poem beautifully captures the essence of autumn and the quiet reverence for Mrs. Bodine. The final lines, comparing the Persimmon Tree to the fruit itself, are especially moving. To me, the lines suggest that memory, like the fruit, should be fully embraced and cherished. Most enjoyable read, Yellow Rose.
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Yellow Rose
Date: 6/8/2025 4:24:00 AM
thank you for stopping by, Mickey, and for your uplifting comments. You definitely 'got' my poem, and I'm so grateful you did!!! Mrs. Bodine was an elderly childhood neighbor who had countless persimmon trees in her back yard. You're right, I wanted to show her reverence and embrace memories. I so appreciate your visit. Am following you, Yellow Rose
Date: 6/7/2025 5:54:00 AM
Sweet memories. My wife is Korean and persimmons are a popular treat for them. Can't say I'm a fan but love this little tale
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Yellow Rose
Date: 6/7/2025 8:36:00 AM
thank you for your kind words....glad you liked my little tale.
Date: 6/6/2025 5:19:00 PM
I love the imagery in this poem, Yellow Rose. It's sound like a lovely lady and a tasty treat. Have a great day! A poet friend in Texas. I'm following your poetry now. :-)
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Texas Cowboy
Date: 6/8/2025 9:14:00 PM
Thinking about posting a few poems again, it's been a while. Thanks for the inquiry. Have a great day! Bill
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Tom Woody
Date: 6/7/2025 5:52:00 AM
Billiam? 'ow are ya mate?
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Yellow Rose
Date: 6/6/2025 5:32:00 PM
thanks for your complimentary words about my imagery. Excited to be a part of Poetry Soup. You're my first follower! Thrilled! :-)
Date: 6/6/2025 5:07:00 PM
Never had a persimmon, from what you say they must be simply delicious. Enjoyed the read, welcome to PoetrySoup… Beryl
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Yellow Rose
Date: 6/6/2025 5:30:00 PM
Thank you for welcoming me so quickly to Poetry Soup. I'm excited to be here. I grew up eating persimmons. My grandmother made the most delicious persimmon jelly.

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