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The Perfect Time of the Day

It happens twice a day, That time when the big and little hand on our clocks get together at six, To make six thirty the call. The only times that the pendulum of time and life, Is for that briefest of moments in perfect balance, Before the two hands on the clock part company. Oh, but we could glue them together or freeze the moment in time. The question must be asked though, Does the pendulum we keep in our head, That we use to bring some balance to our lives, And to give us a proper sense of perspective, Mirror the actions of the pendulum on the clock. Or do we have the ability to keep it always on six, So that the need to build an actual perfect pendulum, Becomes a purely academic question. Should we make regular checks on the pendulum in our head, For signs of mental fatigue, And who should we sue if the cracks appear, Because of undue pressure, From too much clock watching.

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Date: 2/5/2018 1:19:00 AM
Nice thoughtful write: Yes you are right, every person has a voice from inside which always ask him/her to keep balance , to do the right, because your actions will be questioned Should we make regular checks on the pendulum in our head, For signs of mental fatigue, And who should we sue if the cracks appear, Because of undue pressure, From too much clock watching.
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David Smith
Date: 2/5/2018 1:10:00 PM
Very kind of you to say that. I think also having friends who give honest feedback on how we are behaving also help's us keep balanced. Have a good week. Best regards David in NZ
Date: 12/27/2017 5:15:00 AM
I much prefer my circadian rhythm, great thoughtful write
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David Smith
Date: 12/28/2017 12:02:00 AM
Thanks Lewis. Time management seems to dominate the landscape both figuratively and literally these days. I appreciate your giving time to read my work. Best regards David in NZ
Date: 11/14/2017 10:24:00 PM
Love this, David- thoughtful, humourous piece. Or is that timepiece? Regards, Viv
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Date: 11/28/2017 3:32:00 PM
Was not sure how this piece would come across Viv. Glad you liked it. Sorry took so long to reply. My time management has been out of kilter lately but it always comes right at six. Keep your poetry coming as poetry and a sense of humour is all we have to keep the cause of freedom alive. Take care David

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