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The Perfect Storm

Our prisons are built from our desire And each stone of its walls from our own hand As prisoners, we become a liar From our choices, we will not understand The rooms and spaces seem unimportant They're only filled with intoxication Where nothing to us is as important Then a door to our lover's temptation Where wants and needs find hope without question To fill a hunger it will never fill The mind struggles with its own confession When passion becomes a cold empty swill When lies and our deceit become the norm A fantasy invites the perfect storm 9/29/17 contest A Perfect Storm

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Date: 10/4/2017 5:31:00 PM
Well done. I really liked how you summed it up with that last line: A fantasy invites the perfect storm. That is fantastic!!
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Date: 10/3/2017 9:23:00 AM
Frederic, wonderful writing, I loved your perfect storm !
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Date: 10/1/2017 3:04:00 PM
Moving expression of how we can be our own worst enemies--well-written, Frederic! Janice
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Date: 9/30/2017 12:58:00 PM
You are so right! This is a deep and honest poem.
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Date: 9/30/2017 5:28:00 AM
A sad write, Frederic. Good luck om the contest. I'm used to the sheer beauty of romance in your writes. This was sad to read, but I understand it's for a contest. Blessings, dear.
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Date: 9/29/2017 7:22:00 PM
A fantastic write Frederic. So true, and your last two lines are tremendous; prophetic and accurate because the truth always come out sooner or later. Your poem is beautifully written and so insightful. Well done. Good luck in the contest! :)
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