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The Perfect Love of You

The perfect love of you The wind it gusts upon my face Across my lips the breeze does trace Of images I can’t replace The perfect love of you The clouds they roam the heavens slow These silent visions softly flow A solitude I’ve come to know The perfect love of you The rain is wet upon my skin So precious as it does begin Now bringing to my mind again The perfect love of you The sun is bright within my eyes Aglow across these April skies As once again I realize The perfect love of you The moon does shine this springtime night Beaming forth its wondrous light Illumined on its pristine flight The perfect love of you For everyday these sights I see Affection formed of destiny In whispered thoughts for only me The perfect love of you Good night Soupers

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Date: 4/12/2017 8:00:00 AM
If only She'd knew.Anything beautiful in your life is a reminder of the love she shared with you.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/12/2017 8:24:00 AM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend. You are always so very nice to me with your wonderful comments on my poetry. I smile each time you visit.
Date: 4/12/2017 5:34:00 AM
Good morning Chris, I am finally having real espresso again, and sitting here sipping it in my own bed. Hoping you have a good night there! With great and sweet dreams, where that perfect love plays a major part.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/12/2017 8:23:00 AM
Good morning Darren. Well, that is great news, I am happy you are steadily walking the road to recovery. Keep smiling.
Date: 4/12/2017 5:09:00 AM
Oh Chris. Good Morning. This was the most beautiful way to stat the day. Always do you deliver the total package of theme words format and more. Always do you place attention to detail in your work excuse me poetic work. Honestly. This is excellent in its entirety. Enjoy the morning and day.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/12/2017 8:22:00 AM
Thank you Lisa. You are always so very kind to me and I appreciate your visits so very much. I hope you have a great day too.
Date: 4/12/2017 4:00:00 AM
Another beautiful poem of your Chris. You have a way with words, thats for sure. A 7+. Actually ,make that a 10.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/12/2017 8:21:00 AM
Thank you Maria so very much for your kindness. I appreciate your visits always my friend.
Date: 4/12/2017 12:30:00 AM
A perfect poem Chris, delightfully exquisite. #7
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Chris Green
Date: 4/12/2017 8:20:00 AM
Thank you Elizabeth. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 4/11/2017 11:00:00 PM
Beautifully crafted, Chris! Wonderful mate
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Chris Green
Date: 4/12/2017 8:20:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend
Date: 4/11/2017 10:54:00 PM
"The clouds they roam the heavens slow" = love it, Chris. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 4/12/2017 8:19:00 AM
Thanks so much Doug, Funny, that stanza was a last minute addition to the poem to give it 6 stanzas instead of 5. I just like even numbers. :)
Date: 4/11/2017 6:02:00 PM
Wow I love it !! Beautiful write , So good I wish I wrote it.. Great flow..
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Chris Green
Date: 4/12/2017 8:18:00 AM
Thanks so much Glen. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one and I appreciate your nice comments

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