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The Pensive Poet- POTD

August-5- 2026
Contest- The Pensive Poet Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Constance La France
~PLACED FIRST~

"A poet sees things which others seem to ignore and stores up his thoughts and impressions in the casket of verse, treasuring them as valuables that Time can't steal"~ By Poet
 
Alone, when I sit in my room in pensive mood,
Thoughts flit across my mind in endless succession.
They erupt out slicing time and space,
And flow in disarray, in a jumbled mass.

Then my facile pen starts moving quickly,
Gathering my thoughts in reflective refrain.
Like waves beating madly across the shoreline,
Emotions flow out, my mind no longer can contain.

On flipping through the pages of my life,
Deep nostalgia overwhelms me.
Like falling petals, as years hastily pass,
I long for the past when my days were quite glossy.

My mind wanders to distant memories dear,
And I wish to preserve what time has stolen.
So, I scribble my thoughts on the sheet in hand
To traverse through bygone times over again.
In my silence, I hear footsteps of the past
And see my dear ones as shadows fading out.
My parents who are no more there to care,
Gleam before, leaving my eyes misty. 

I am on a sacred mission~
To stitch together broken memories and moments
And build a bridge between past and present.
My poems, l hope will serve as a window
That I can open and close at will.

Only in silence l can behold scenes,
That others miss out in diverse distractions.
The more I grow silent, the more I can see and hear.

 I get ensnared by the breathtaking view of a sunset
The serenade of nocturnal birds,
The beauty of blooms and meadows wide and green,
The vastness of the sapphire sky -
Where rainbows arch after a drizzle 
Or stars twinkle at a cloudless night.

Rills as they murmur and cataracts as they roar,
Fall on my ears as dulcet music of the cosmic band.

I wish to recall such sights and sounds
That once I looked on with a casual glance, 
And fell like grains of sand funneled through the hour glass,
Later forsaken with no effort to keep or brush them up.

I wish to preserve them in poetry’s fragile art~
A craft sharpened and perfected in pensive mood.
So, time wouldn’t steal them away from my memory. 
I strive to make my verses a mirror reflecting life.
Copyright Β© | Year Posted 2026

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La France Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 4:24 PM
Valsa, beautifully penned and congratulations on your win in my The Pensive Poet Contest, well done, congratulations on receiving POTD also ⭐
Guptar Avatar
August 13, 2026 at 3:10 AM
Congratulations Valsa on the honour of POTD and first place win with this lovely poem coming from the depth of heart and mind of a pensive poet. You have beautifully painted out with a fine brush the reasons for your poetic mission. For health reasons I am gradually starting to lift my foot from the accelerator. Perhaps I may shortly come out with a blog on this issue..... Wishing you a blessed day.
George Avatar
August 13, 2026 at 4:28 AM
Thanks a lot dear Krish for your lovely comment and congratulations. Happy that l could share the first place win with you. At the same time so sorry to hear that you have health issues and you plan to de-accelerate your pace. Wish you a speedy recovery and better healthπŸ™
Goldsmith Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 3:09 PM
Back withΒ Congratulations on another win. Hooray!!! I enjoyed reading your wonderfulΒ "The Pensive Poet"Β write again. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...............
George Avatar
August 13, 2026 at 4:20 AM
Glad that you enjoyed reading my poem. Thanks a lot for your Congratulations πŸ™
M  Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 1:48 PM
A beautiful tender write Valsa! Belated POTD Congratulations! Debx
George Avatar
August 13, 2026 at 4:19 AM
Thanks a lot dear poet friend for your Congratulations πŸ™
Poet Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 7:02 AM
Back, with congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautifully crafted poem.
George Avatar
August 13, 2026 at 4:15 AM
Much grateful to you for your sweet support. Proud of sharing the podium win with you πŸ™
Andresen Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 4:19 AM
- Hi Valsa, back with a well-deserved congratulations :) - hugs
George Avatar
August 13, 2026 at 4:13 AM
Dear Anne, thanks a lot for your congratulations. Happy l could share the first place win with you.HugsπŸ™
Hind Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 11:03 PM
congrats belated for POTD!
George Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 5:52 AM
Dear Paige, your congratulation is thankfully received.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 1:00 PM
Lovely thoughts on writing! Congrats on POTD!
George Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 5:50 AM
Thank you so much dear. KimπŸ™
Alhemaidy Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 2:32 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful POTD!
George Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 8:53 PM
Thanks a lot, dear friend for your Congratulations!πŸ™
La France Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 2:11 PM
Soupmail πŸ‘€
George Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 8:49 PM
Thanks dear Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 8:47 AM
Sorry I am late... Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "The Pensive Poet" write. Great quote/ending... Have a blessed weekend with your wonderful win...............
George Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 8:48 PM
It's Okay dear Paula, I often miss seeing POTD in time. Thanks for your Congratulations and blessings. Sending you love.
Nicole Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 6:18 PM
Dearest Valsa, in this case, I don't believe silence is something to fear. ' Only in silence l can behold scenes that others miss. ' There's so much truth in this statement. Sometimes, just being in the quiet you hear more than imagined you would. You feel moments deeply. Your thoughts are beautiful, tender and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. Hugs and blessings. ~ Brandy
George Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 8:49 PM
Your warm words have thrilled me this morning. Thanks a lot dear Brandy. Sweet friend, you are always generous in your appreciation. Wish you a Happy weekend, Stay blessed... ! Love and hugs.πŸ’•πŸ™
Gibbons Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 5:02 PM
Congratulations Valsa on your well deserved POTD honour for your wonderful moving poem. Pleasure reading it hugzzz have a blessed weekend πŸ¦‹β€οΈπŸ«‚
George Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 8:44 PM
Dear poet friend Dorothy, thanks a lot for your kind visit to my page with congratulations and words of encouragement. Wish you too a Happy Weekend. Love and hugs.πŸ™
Poet Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 2:36 PM
Back with hearty congratulations on your well-deserved POTD, with this stunning poem.
George Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 8:38 PM
Thank you so much for always encouraging. Your support is ever seen as an additional strength for me.πŸ™
Anaya Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 9:19 AM
Congratulations Valsa! Your eyes are open to wonderfully sun tuned murmurs that bloom from your pensive pen, from your loving heart, hope you share many more luminous memoir's of thoughtful golden verses, treasures like this one, beautiful soul. Enjoy the day! :)
George Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 8:36 PM
Dear Anaya, thanks a lot for your sweet and encouraging words. They are much appreciated. Stay happy and enjoy the weekend... πŸ™
Seeker Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 5:01 AM
Congratulations, pensive poet! So tenderly and artistically crafted. Well deserved POTD.
George Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 5:37 AM
Dear Seeker friend, your comment is much appreciated. Thanks a lotπŸ™
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 4:33 AM
a well-deserved POTD designation....just beautiful! best wishes with this contest entry, wishing you the best πŸ‘
George Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 5:35 AM
Dear Sara, thank you so much for your warm wishes and congratulations πŸ™
Sharma  Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 4:20 AM
Heartiest congratulations on this well-deserved and outstanding honour of POTD! And fir having your poem recognised as it should be! Infinite times! This one is an absolutely FAVE ~ keep inspiring and shining, beautiful soul πŸ’«πŸ’«πŸ’œπŸ’œβœ¨βœ¨
George Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 5:33 AM
Once again l feel blessed. Thanks a lot HiyaπŸ™
Sharma  Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 4:17 AM
My dearest Valsa, firstly I'm looking for appropriate adjectives to describe the essence of your absolutely heartfelt and resonating words, how deeply they sink in my soul with every line that I softly hold in my eyes..gosh! Absolutely speechless.. isn't this the absolute superpower of poets? For through their verses they are able to open a portal between the last and the present.. creating a mirror of life.. reflecting through the moment that faded away..in the mis of time.. i LOVE so many lines here especially ~ "I am on a sacred mission~ To stitch together broken memories and moments And build a bridge between past and present. My poems, l hope will serve as a window That I can open and close at will." And "That once I looked on with a casual glance, And fell like grains of sand funneled through the hour glass" Goodness, how absolutely soulful and spiritually stirring! πŸ₯ΉπŸšπŸ§œβ€β™€οΈπŸŒΉβœ¨πŸ’«
George Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 5:31 AM
I feel swept off my feet. This glowing comment from one who writes poems of unfathomable depth is something incredible. However you have blessed me by your wonderful words of appreciation and have made my day. Thanks a lot dear little sister πŸ₯°πŸ™
Rodgers Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 4:07 AM
Dear Valsa, back to congratulate your for getting POTD. Blessings, Daniel
George Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 5:24 AM
Thank you so much for your congratulations and blessings dear Daniel πŸ™
Kitchin Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 2:57 AM
Valsa, wonderfully penned. Congratulations on POTD and best for the contest.
George Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 5:23 AM
Dear Tania, thanks a lot for your support and best wishes πŸ™
Edmonds  Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 2:27 AM
Congratulations Valsa on having received Poem of the Day for your wonderful poem. Well done… Beryl
George Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 5:07 AM
Thank you so much dear BerylπŸ™
Daniel Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 2:12 AM
A lovely poem Valsa, congratulations on your POTD😊
George Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 5:06 AM
Dear Joanna, thanks for your support and congratulations πŸ™
Andresen Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 1:48 AM
- A wonderful poem, Valsa :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. and best wishes in the contest ... I have already put it as the top winning poem :) - hugs
George Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 5:03 AM
Dear Anne, thanks for your heartfelt appreciation and boosting my confidence with your assumption that this will be a contest winner. Love and hugs πŸ₯°
Jones Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 1:23 AM
Love your quote! This is an amazing piece Valsa! A great contest entry also! Congratulations on potd!
George Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 4:59 AM
Dear Karen, thanks a lot for liking my quote along with my poem. πŸ™
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