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Written August 4 2026 

The Pensive Poet

The Pensive Poet Contest sponsor Constance LaFrance written 8/4/26

Turquoise thoughts form 
like peach perspiration  
Sliding down my feverish face
Baked in a steamy shower of brain fog
Ideas fall in incomplete patterns 
Like a red runaway train going no where

I get a little inspiration from fellow poet
Whose words flow fuchsia free with melodic ease
I bake and contemplate black cauldron
As my food of thought bank
Whimsical words are my magic wand
Which I use as a spoon to stir

My muse consuming cranberry daiquiri 
Is wasted and no longer helping me
The night is cloaked with onyx vail
Saved by polka dots of silver stars
I reach for them in denim desperation 
For what is a poet without a poem

If my wish is granted I too will write
Like the greatest poet upon the clouds
My teal torture will melt into a sea of creativity 
Amethyst ideas like a new white wind
Washing away the lost thoughts 
Starting a new purple poetic journey 

There is a new focus on my path
I’m not the best or the worst but
I can love my heart song and tap into 
The melody unique to my sandy soul
I can gather my emotions like a potion

Stirring you and me like a maroon melody
Not all who read will be moved
But for the fantastic few who 
Visit me on writer’s block we shall persevere 
And in due time writing sublimely 
Guiding the runaway train to new destinations
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Goldsmith Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 2:42 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful/fun write. Never heard of a cranberry daiquiri. But it sounds good. Guess after a few there will be No writer’s block. Hahaha!!!! Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...............
Jones Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 3:25 PM
😂 You’re funny Paula! Thanks!
La France Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 12:36 PM
Karen, beautifully penned and congratulations on your win in my The Pensive Poet contest, I love how your muse is sipping cranberry daiquiri's, so many great lines, well done , a FAV ⭐
Jones Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 1:31 PM
Constance I am honored you fav and I’m grateful for my placement. Thank you!😊
Poet Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 6:53 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautifully crafted poem. Karen,
Jones Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 10:06 AM
Thank you Sotto! 😊
George Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 8:21 PM
Karen, you are not a slow moving locomotive, but a fast running train headed to new locations. I can't keep track with you. Beautifully composed. Congratulations on your first place win.👏
Anaya Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 3:12 PM
Back with Congratulations 🎊 on your high placement KJ!✨
Jones Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 3:22 PM
Thank you! 🙏
Andresen Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 11:51 AM
- HOORAY !!! - Congratulations :) - hugs
Jones Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 1:58 PM
Thanks you are so sweet Anne-Lise! 🥰
Andresen Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 5:55 AM
- Karen, you write this with magical colors ... I would gladly borrow your magic wand to stir my pot now and then ... - A wonderful poem :) - A top winning poem I would believe (and wish) - hugs
Jones Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 9:14 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise! 🥰
Delegans Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 12:38 PM
Absolutely beautiful poem, Karen. Think I have said it before but you are really talented at using colors to light up our imaginations when we visit your poems. Your imagery in this one is no different. Enjoyed!
Jones Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 1:00 PM
You are kind! Thank you Christopher.
Anaya Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 9:35 AM
Perfuse penning of an undeniably you "Stirring you and me like a maroon melody" love that🤔 its what you did here, I feel your colorful song a wanderers muse that'll just keep giving & getting better. Never end this purple passion! Whimsy good. Bol 💕
Jones Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 2:24 PM
Thanks Anaya! I really appreciate your support!😊
Poet Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 5:09 AM
Dear Karen, I hope that your wish comes true. You wrote a beautiful poem that hovers amid the skies. Best for a win.
Jones Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 7:33 AM
I appreciate you Sotto!😊
Smith  Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 5:04 AM
Keep those train tracks clear - let the dream train continue on its journey.
Jones Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 7:32 AM
😀 Thanks for reading Alison!
Edmonds  Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 2:24 AM
Dear Karen, your wish has been granted, your poem is floating amongst clouds. A wonderful write… Beryl ⭐
Jones Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 2:31 AM
Dearest Beryl I appreciate your comment for I was truly without my muse! Hugs 🥰
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