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What is this strange place we find ourselves in? We know we are alive, yet we feel incomplete, so we cease thought flow, going in, within. Polarities orbit the void, as they meet and greet, a dance we witness nonchalantly from space, surrendering each past belief at God’s feet. Vibrant rhythms of silence, resound as His grace, imbibed by our heart eagerly, in childlike delight, yet mired by sorrow, seeing not yet God’s face. Soul’s yearning grows, to transmute as living light, pervading each cell of this form we here ensoul; boon’s now bane, as we crave for clear sight. Renouncing earth bound goals, in our life role, baptised in the stream, our soul’s again whole. 07-July-2022 FIVE STANZA TERZA RIMA Poetry Contest Sponsor: L Milton Hankins

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Date: 8/3/2022 2:07:00 AM
The mysteries of life unfold in this marvelous poem Seeker. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 8/3/2022 3:20:00 AM
Thank you, Connie, so delighted you like this one
Date: 8/2/2022 9:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "The Pathless Path" is a Creative write. Have a fun/great/blessed day................
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Date: 8/3/2022 3:19:00 AM
Thank you, Paula dear
Date: 8/2/2022 9:08:00 AM
Congratulations, Unseeking Seeker, for your placement in my terza rima contest. Very thought-provoking with good phrasing and rhyme.
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Date: 8/2/2022 9:28:00 AM
So happy you liked it, Milt. Thanks for hosting and for the placement :)
Date: 7/7/2022 2:05:00 AM
Lofty and divine ! Most eligible for a win ....
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Date: 7/7/2022 2:24:00 AM
Let’s not jump the gun, Milt is a perfectionist and I’m a cartoonist!
Date: 7/7/2022 12:53:00 AM
Loved this poem. Well rhymed.
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Date: 7/7/2022 1:35:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!

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