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When single pointed is our attention Observing flow of divine magnetism In timeless time, bliss currents gain traction As soma flows within mind-body prism Childlike pure heart and receptive spirit Celebrates dance of dynamic stillness Our heart’s burning yearning, resolve and grit Entwines consciousness with the That oneness When head and heart meld, inner conflict ends Erst ego spawned fears and desires are shorn Vaporised presence, to will of God bends The false falls away, we become twice born This beauteous journey without movement Reveals soul, blissful and luminescent 27-March-2022

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Date: 4/7/2022 5:59:00 AM
Love the line: The false falls away, we become twice born. Congratulations on POTD!
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/7/2022 9:24:00 AM
Thank you, Kim!
Date: 3/30/2022 11:17:00 PM
Dwija, the Twice-born Hindu call ncept, as well as Soma, a meditation aide? Never tried it,but heard it's Swami's LSD. CONGRATS ON POTD; hardervtimecthan usual with internet yesterday. Shalom ShalOm
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Anil Deo
Date: 3/31/2022 10:37:00 PM
Thanks US in US and in us. Shalom shalom and Tat Tvam Asi! I lived saying, Soham, Soham and AHAM BRAHMASMI in DLS, South Africa
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/30/2022 11:23:00 PM
Nothing so mysterious, Anil :) Soma is the bliss released from Bindu point, that bald spot behind our head. It is actually in each node, each cell. Twice born alludes to ego death. Identity (feeling of separateness) recedes, yielding to recognition of oneness.
Date: 3/29/2022 3:23:00 PM
The journey of all journeys...A childlike nirvana...precious Unseeking seeker. Congratulations. Anaya
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/29/2022 7:29:00 PM
Thank you, I Am!
Date: 3/29/2022 2:36:00 PM
Would that we all could have a "Childlike pure heart and receptive spirit". I like the flow of these timeless thoughts and the word play of "false falls away". Well done my friend, and congratulations for your POTD acknowledgement ~ John
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/29/2022 7:29:00 PM
Thank you, John, Gods bless
Date: 3/29/2022 1:38:00 PM
powerful and exquisitely written. You have keen insights that just seem to flow.
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/29/2022 7:24:00 PM
So happy you enjoyed, Sara!
Date: 3/29/2022 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations on finding the 'pathless path,' Seeker, and congratulations on POTD as well. Ecstasy and Beyond, Gershon
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/29/2022 7:23:00 PM
Thank you, gw! :)
Date: 3/29/2022 11:37:00 AM
It is best to have a *Childlike heart* like it states in Matthew 18:3. (Innocent and Trustful) Your words caress softly around me and they lift my heart. This is beautiful in every way. Congratulations Unseeking Seeker, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/29/2022 7:23:00 PM
Sans ego, heart is pure. Thank you for showering blessings on me, dear Brandy :) God bless
Date: 3/29/2022 11:04:00 AM
Seeker, congratulations on your POTD! You have created amazing images and imagery with your stunning use of words - "timeless time," "dance of dynamic stillness," "vaporized presence." Truly you have captured this experience! So happy to see this as a POTD! Sending you blessings for your "beauteous journey " into the "blissful and luminescent."
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/29/2022 7:19:00 PM
Thank you, Sam! I’m humbled by your resonation with the written words, echoing within each heart
Date: 3/29/2022 9:36:00 AM
Seeker, deep, powerful and beautifully penned and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~Constance
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/29/2022 7:17:00 PM
Thank you, dear Constance!
Date: 3/29/2022 8:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your P.O.T.D. win. Beautiful with deep meaning/thought. Have a great/blessed day.....................
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/29/2022 9:20:00 AM
Thank you dear Paula!
Date: 3/29/2022 8:47:00 AM
Congrats on your deserved POTD.
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/29/2022 9:19:00 AM
Thank you, Victor, hope you are feeling better now
Date: 3/29/2022 8:29:00 AM
You've done it again, Unseeking Seeker. You've written a poem so worthy of this special recognition. Congratulations on your P.O.T.D.! Simply lovely!
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/29/2022 9:19:00 AM
Thank you Milt! This is praise from Caesar!
Date: 3/29/2022 8:19:00 AM
Such a joy in your third verse, conflict ends, ego spawned. fears and desires shorn, then to will of God bends. beautiful lines, Unseeking Seeker. Congratulations on your POTD. Have a blessed day! Bill
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/29/2022 9:18:00 AM
So happy these words resonate in your awakened heart, Bill!
Date: 3/29/2022 8:06:00 AM
Just beautiful as always Unseeking Seeker. You have a gift for the flow of Oneness and your words dance into loving consciousness. I love "Childlike pure heart and receptive spirit" Congratulations on POTD ! Hugs, Susan :)
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/29/2022 9:17:00 AM
Thank you dear Susan! :)
Date: 3/29/2022 6:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD! A 'luminescent" write! :)Paulette
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/29/2022 7:40:00 AM
So happy you enjoyed, Paulette
Date: 3/29/2022 5:10:00 AM
BIG congrats on POTD, US. Much enlightenment in these wisdom words. Enjoy your day.
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/29/2022 7:39:00 AM
Thank you dear Vijay
Date: 3/29/2022 4:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Dear Poet. Your poem is a perfect sonnet with deep and divine message. "This beauteous journey without movement Reveals soul, blissful and luminescent" - this ending couplet summarize profound philosophical, mystical and spiritual understanding and feelings. Heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved POTD honour. Best wishes ~ Mala
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/29/2022 7:39:00 AM
So happy this resonates in your glowing heart, Mala!
Date: 3/29/2022 4:50:00 AM
Congrats on your POTD. Blessings ~ Debra
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/29/2022 7:38:00 AM
Thank you, Debra
Date: 3/29/2022 3:46:00 AM
Congratulations Unseeking Seeker, I need to process this and let it in! Happy Tuesday !!
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/29/2022 7:38:00 AM
Shall be happy to address any questions you may have on this, Mike!
Date: 3/29/2022 3:39:00 AM
Congrats on your POTD. Thinking you may be on to something with the need to observe divine magnetism. Haven't been as intentioned there as I could be... Thanks for the good thoughts
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/29/2022 7:37:00 AM
Thanks Jeff … not observing but feeling :)
Date: 3/29/2022 12:59:00 AM
"In timeless time", "Pathless path" - Great mystic write. Beautiful sonnet. Congratulations!
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/29/2022 7:36:00 AM
Thank you, Chris!
Date: 3/29/2022 12:34:00 AM
A well written thought provoking sonnet US, deserving of POTD honours, congratulations. Tom
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/29/2022 7:36:00 AM
Thank you, Tom! So happy you enjoyed
Date: 3/27/2022 5:58:00 AM
Hello Unseeking Seeker, this is a deep meaning beautifully done poem. It will be my fav. Enjoy your day my friend.Blessings.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/27/2022 3:11:00 PM
You are welcome Unseeking Seeker.Thank you. God bless you to.
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/27/2022 7:47:00 AM
Thank you, dear Darlene for making this a fave! God bless

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