Unseeking Seeker Poet Sonnet

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The Pathless Path

When single pointed is our attention
Observing flow of divine magnetism 
In timeless time, bliss currents gain traction
As soma flows within mind-body prism

Childlike pure heart and receptive spirit
Celebrates dance of dynamic stillness 
Our heart’s burning yearning, resolve and grit
Entwines consciousness with the That oneness

When head and heart meld, inner conflict ends
Erst ego spawned fears and desires are shorn
Vaporised presence, to will of God bends
The false falls away, we become twice born 

This beauteous journey without movement 
Reveals soul, blissful and luminescent 

27-March-2022

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Kim Rodrigues April 7, 2022 at 5:59 AM Love the line: The false falls away, we become twice born. Congratulations on POTD! Unseeking Seeker April 7, 2022 at 9:24 AM Thank you, Kim!

Anil Deo March 30, 2022 at 11:17 PM Dwija, the Twice-born Hindu call ncept, as well as Soma, a meditation aide? Never tried it,but heard it's Swami's LSD. CONGRATS ON POTD; hardervtimecthan usual with internet yesterday. Shalom ShalOm Anil Deo March 31, 2022 at 10:37 PM Thanks US in US and in us. Shalom shalom and Tat Tvam Asi! I lived saying, Soham, Soham and AHAM BRAHMASMI in DLS, South Africa Unseeking Seeker March 30, 2022 at 11:23 PM Nothing so mysterious, Anil :) Soma is the bliss released from Bindu point, that bald spot behind our head. It is actually in each node, each cell. Twice born alludes to ego death. Identity (feeling of separateness) recedes, yielding to recognition of oneness.

I Am Anaya March 29, 2022 at 3:23 PM The journey of all journeys...A childlike nirvana...precious Unseeking seeker. Congratulations. Anaya Unseeking Seeker March 29, 2022 at 7:29 PM Thank you, I Am!

John Watt March 29, 2022 at 2:36 PM Would that we all could have a "Childlike pure heart and receptive spirit". I like the flow of these timeless thoughts and the word play of "false falls away". Well done my friend, and congratulations for your POTD acknowledgement ~ John Unseeking Seeker March 29, 2022 at 7:29 PM Thank you, John, Gods bless

Gershon Wolf March 29, 2022 at 12:39 PM Congratulations on finding the 'pathless path,' Seeker, and congratulations on POTD as well. Ecstasy and Beyond, Gershon Unseeking Seeker March 29, 2022 at 7:23 PM Thank you, gw! :)

Brandy Nicole March 29, 2022 at 11:37 AM It is best to have a *Childlike heart* like it states in Matthew 18:3. (Innocent and Trustful) Your words caress softly around me and they lift my heart. This is beautiful in every way. Congratulations Unseeking Seeker, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy Unseeking Seeker March 29, 2022 at 7:23 PM Sans ego, heart is pure. Thank you for showering blessings on me, dear Brandy :) God bless

Sam Kauffman March 29, 2022 at 11:04 AM Seeker, congratulations on your POTD! You have created amazing images and imagery with your stunning use of words - "timeless time," "dance of dynamic stillness," "vaporized presence." Truly you have captured this experience! So happy to see this as a POTD! Sending you blessings for your "beauteous journey " into the "blissful and luminescent." Unseeking Seeker March 29, 2022 at 7:19 PM Thank you, Sam! I’m humbled by your resonation with the written words, echoing within each heart

Constance La France March 29, 2022 at 9:36 AM Seeker, deep, powerful and beautifully penned and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~Constance Unseeking Seeker March 29, 2022 at 7:17 PM Thank you, dear Constance!

Paula Goldsmith March 29, 2022 at 8:58 AM Congratulations on your P.O.T.D. win. Beautiful with deep meaning/thought. Have a great/blessed day..................... Unseeking Seeker March 29, 2022 at 9:20 AM Thank you dear Paula!

Victor Buhagiar March 29, 2022 at 8:47 AM Congrats on your deserved POTD. Unseeking Seeker March 29, 2022 at 9:19 AM Thank you, Victor, hope you are feeling better now

L Milton Hankins March 29, 2022 at 8:29 AM You've done it again, Unseeking Seeker. You've written a poem so worthy of this special recognition. Congratulations on your P.O.T.D.! Simply lovely! Unseeking Seeker March 29, 2022 at 9:19 AM Thank you Milt! This is praise from Caesar!

Bill Baker March 29, 2022 at 8:19 AM Such a joy in your third verse, conflict ends, ego spawned. fears and desires shorn, then to will of God bends. beautiful lines, Unseeking Seeker. Congratulations on your POTD. Have a blessed day! Bill Unseeking Seeker March 29, 2022 at 9:18 AM So happy these words resonate in your awakened heart, Bill!

Susan Lawrence March 29, 2022 at 8:06 AM Just beautiful as always Unseeking Seeker. You have a gift for the flow of Oneness and your words dance into loving consciousness. I love "Childlike pure heart and receptive spirit" Congratulations on POTD ! Hugs, Susan :) Unseeking Seeker March 29, 2022 at 9:17 AM Thank you dear Susan! :)

Paulette Calasibetta March 29, 2022 at 6:28 AM Congratulations on your POTD! A 'luminescent" write! :)Paulette Unseeking Seeker March 29, 2022 at 7:40 AM So happy you enjoyed, Paulette

Vijay Pandit March 29, 2022 at 5:10 AM BIG congrats on POTD, US. Much enlightenment in these wisdom words. Enjoy your day. Unseeking Seeker March 29, 2022 at 7:39 AM Thank you dear Vijay

Malabika Ray Choudhury March 29, 2022 at 4:58 AM Congratulations on your POTD, Dear Poet. Your poem is a perfect sonnet with deep and divine message. "This beauteous journey without movement Reveals soul, blissful and luminescent" - this ending couplet summarize profound philosophical, mystical and spiritual understanding and feelings. Heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved POTD honour. Best wishes ~ Mala Unseeking Seeker March 29, 2022 at 7:39 AM So happy this resonates in your glowing heart, Mala!

Debra L Brown March 29, 2022 at 4:50 AM Congrats on your POTD. Blessings ~ Debra Unseeking Seeker March 29, 2022 at 7:38 AM Thank you, Debra

Mike Gentile March 29, 2022 at 3:46 AM Congratulations Unseeking Seeker, I need to process this and let it in! Happy Tuesday !! Unseeking Seeker March 29, 2022 at 7:38 AM Shall be happy to address any questions you may have on this, Mike!

Jeff Kyser March 29, 2022 at 3:39 AM Congrats on your POTD. Thinking you may be on to something with the need to observe divine magnetism. Haven't been as intentioned there as I could be... Thanks for the good thoughts Unseeking Seeker March 29, 2022 at 7:37 AM Thanks Jeff … not observing but feeling :)

Christuraj Alex March 29, 2022 at 12:59 AM "In timeless time", "Pathless path" - Great mystic write. Beautiful sonnet. Congratulations! Unseeking Seeker March 29, 2022 at 7:36 AM Thank you, Chris!

Tom Cunningham March 29, 2022 at 12:34 AM A well written thought provoking sonnet US, deserving of POTD honours, congratulations. Tom Unseeking Seeker March 29, 2022 at 7:36 AM Thank you, Tom! So happy you enjoyed

Darlene De Beaulieu March 27, 2022 at 5:58 AM Hello Unseeking Seeker, this is a deep meaning beautifully done poem. It will be my fav. Enjoy your day my friend.Blessings. Darlene De Beaulieu March 27, 2022 at 3:11 PM You are welcome Unseeking Seeker.Thank you. God bless you to. Unseeking Seeker March 27, 2022 at 7:47 AM Thank you, dear Darlene for making this a fave! God bless