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The Panther

I’m usually afraid of tall girls, Higher than the Chrysler Building, Brighter than black Chevy, But then I was totally surprised, By your panther eyes, Your eyes black as jewels, oceans, I could not resist their mystery, I drowned in the ocean of her charm, This panther has captured my soul, I’ve loved her for twenty years. This panther.

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Date: 8/13/2023 1:54:00 PM
I thought you were talking about me, JK lol. I'm almost 5'10 with ebony eyes, except I'm not as brave and powerful as your beautiful someone! Lovely, with imagery, your poem, Yann.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/13/2023 6:07:00 PM
thanks a lot , I am Anaya, for reading and commenting this one
Date: 8/13/2023 1:43:00 PM
So happy that you found your panther. Hope you happily share many, many more.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/13/2023 6:08:00 PM
Thanks Jerry, don't need many panther,just care about one,smiles
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I Am Anaya
Date: 8/13/2023 1:54:00 PM
Haha
Date: 8/13/2023 9:44:00 AM
Beautifully expressed!
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/13/2023 6:08:00 PM
thanks a lot Ilene
Date: 8/12/2023 10:25:00 PM
A beautiful dedication to someone you love.... your panther... ! Is she as fierce and powerful as a panther? Great poem
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/13/2023 6:09:00 PM
thanks Valsa, i can't answer to this question, without compromising something, smiling

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